GHAZAL
Tera aks-e-lab bhi gulaab mein nahi aaye ga
Ye wo kaif hai jo sharaab mein nahi aaye ga
Mera she’r she’r tha be-khabar isi baat se
K ye kaam ishq k baab mein nahi aaye ga
Teri arq-reiz jabeeN bhi ho to qayaamateiN
Mera khooN bhi ho to hisaab mein nahi aaye ga
Rag-e-jaaN ki taar bana sakooN to bayaan ho
Mera dard varna rubaab mein nahi aaye ga
Kisi aur ka wo hua hai to ye gumaan hai…
K “wo ab mere kisi khwaab mein nahi aaye ga”
[RIGHT]written 07-08-2006 01:00 pm[/RIGHT]
Re: Dedicated To Rani Of Jhansi For Her Ghazal "Wo Ab Mere Kisi Khwab Mein Nahi Aayega"
Boht khoob :)
Re: Dedicated To Rani Of Jhansi For Her Ghazal "Wo Ab Mere Kisi Khwab Mein Nahi Aayega"
v nice :)
Re: Dedicated To Rani Of Jhansi For Her Ghazal "Wo Ab Mere Kisi Khwab Mein Nahi Aayega"
nice1!
Re: Dedicated To Rani Of Jhansi For Her Ghazal "Wo Ab Mere Kisi Khwab Mein Nahi Aayega"
Zamil Jigar...Bohat Khoob.....
Keep it Up.
Darwesh !
Re: Dedicated To Rani Of Jhansi For Her Ghazal "Wo Ab Mere Kisi Khwab Mein Nahi Aayega"
wow bohat khoob Zamil. matla to bohat khobsorat hai.verse no 2 is nice too.
Re: Dedicated To Rani Of Jhansi For Her Ghazal "Wo Ab Mere Kisi Khwab Mein Nahi Aayega"
wah zamil bohat khoooob,, itna acha to main b nahin likh saki thi aap ney to is mein 4 chand laga diye :D mubarakbaaaad
Re: Dedicated To Rani Of Jhansi For Her Ghazal "Wo Ab Mere Kisi Khwab Mein Nahi Aayega"
Nice one Zamil. Keep sharing the good work.
Re: Dedicated To Rani Of Jhansi For Her Ghazal “Wo Ab Mere Kisi Khwab Mein Nahi Aayega”
hmmm original was good, tusi tey satyanas kar dita:p
well theekh hi hay meri choice ki nahi:bummer:
Thanda pani for you please pi lain ghussa ager aaya
Re: Dedicated To Rani Of Jhansi For Her Ghazal “Wo Ab Mere Kisi Khwab Mein Nahi Aayega”
beautifully written Zamil…very very gud…:k:
Re: Dedicated To Rani Of Jhansi For Her Ghazal “Wo Ab Mere Kisi Khwab Mein Nahi Aayega”
Bohat Bohat Shukria Dosto… 
Aap sab ki barri nawaazish :k:
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Or Gul jee mujhe ghussa bilkul nahi aaya, choice varries with people…