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Utha ke haath Khuda se bas maangi hai yehi dua
Naseeb ho khushiyaan tumhein tum khush raho sada
Tumhein raahat milay, tumhein chaahat milay
Tumhein saaray jahaan ki muhabbat milay
Jahaan mein sab se ho achay tumhare naseeb
Koi dukh kabhi bhi na aaye tumhare qareeb
Tumhare dil ki har aarzoo poori Khuda karain
Tumhare chaahanay waloon ko kabhi na juda karay
Mil jaayain tum ko mere bhi naseeb ki khushiyaan
Dua hai bas tumhein kabhi gham na milay yahaan
Allah tumhari zindagi ko char chaand lagaayain
Kyon ke zindagi se barh kar aur koi shay nahee
Zindagi hai tu sab kuch hai na ho tu kuch bhi nahee ...
Oh ma god thanks a lot for this dedication Zf Khuda ap ko bhi khush rakhay (ameen)
Aankhain kyo bahar aa rahi hain ?
Mein ne koi anhoni baat tu nahee keh di shayad …
Hamari khushi tu wabasta hai kisi se … Bas Allah Pak unhain khush aur abaad rakhain … Ameen !
NIce One Arif... :)
HaaN.. just a small input...
Now dont say ke... I should put this in RELEGION :D
U used the PLURAL words for ALLAH in your Poem. LIke.. KaraiN and lagayeeN..
As per the Ulema... we should not use it... We should always use... Singular words.. like... Karay.... or Lgaye.
I hope U wont mind.. its not a criticism or objection.. its just a Brotherly Feedback :)
Congratulation sulah ho gaye lamhay aur arifnawaz ki :)
Koyal dedication per
unko pathar tu na maroon kia khayal hai???
or sulaah safae ka yahan kia zikar ??
Brother GS:
Im grateful for your valuable feedback. Yes, I admit that I had used Plural words instead of using Singular, am really happy to see that you’ve provided your feedback. Will take care in future … Bless you my boy … :k:
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Congratulation sulah ho gaye lamhay aur arifnawaz ki :)
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Ji haan, lagta hai Ramzan mein kuch narmi barti gaee hai ...:D
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Koyal ap Ghoray per beth kar kaisay keh sakhti hain kis ki Kis say Sulaah hogaye ......
Arif ap ye kaisay keh sakhtay hain k ramzan main Narmi barti gaye hai?
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