december ki ye adat hai
purani si riwayat hai
kabhi khaali nahi ataa
meray ansoo barhata hai
nayi soghaat lata hai
so ab k bhi december nay
riwayat ko nahi tora
mera daman nahi chora
mjhay phr lay k aya hai
unhi sunsaan rahon par
kayi afrait maazi k
jahan tayyar baithay hain
mujhay phir say lipatnay ko
mera daman pakarnay ko
december tujh say mujhko ab
faqt itna he kehna hai
tera ek bhi sitam mujh ko
nahi ab aur sehna hai
k ab ki baar tujh say main
shikast bilkul na khaonga
chahay mujhko paray marna
ussay phr say bulaonga
ussay me phr manaonga
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v nice deadsoul,thanx 4 sharin.
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thx
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Nice One Deadsoul..
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thx
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Bohat khoob
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thx
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Awesome DS, tum likhtay raha kero yaar... acha likhtay hu buhat munfarid sa...
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december ki ye adat hai purani si riwayat hai kabhi khaali nahi ataa meray ansoo barhata hai nayi soghaat lata hai so ab k bhi december nay riwayat ko nahi tora mera daman nahi chora mjhay phr lay k aya hai unhi sunsaan rahon par kayi afrait maazi k jahan tayyar baithay hain mujhay phir say lipatnay ko mera daman pakarnay ko december tujh say mujhko ab faqt itna he kehna hai tera ek bhi sitam mujh ko nahi ab aur sehna hai k ab ki baar tujh say main shikast bilkul na khaonga chahay mujhko paray marna ussay phr say bulaonga ussay me phr manaonga
deadsoul bohat achi nazm hey. I wish ke aap ka 2010 ka December 2009 ke December sey behtar tha :)
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thx
thx
thx
That's all you have to say to those who read your work and appreciate it?
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nahi amal aisi baat nahi
app log parhtay ho appreciate b kartay ho mjhay bht acha lagta hai aur ap logo ki waja say he motivation milti hai aur likhnay ki
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nahi amal aisi baat nahi app log parhtay ho appreciate b kartay ho mjhay bht acha lagta hai aur ap logo ki waja say he motivation milti hai aur likhnay ki
That's what I am saying. Likhney waley ko agar appreciation aur motivation na miley to wo likh hi nahi sakta. To basically a writer is fueled by his admirers. One can read you and move on without saying even one word. But if someone cares to stop by and leave its opinion on your creation, than I guess the gesture should be properly returned. Agar hameiN opinion ka pata nahi chaley ga to hameiN ye bhi pata nahi chaley ga ke hum likh kesa rahey heiN. So in order to improve, we need readers, and to have readers, we need to engage them by interacting with them. Shaed meiN ghalat hoN, but that's how I feel about it :)
By the way, you write good and you should write more frequently :)
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ummm nice 1 bhai :)