DECEMBER WOHI RAHA...

[Shazia_Arif]

sab kuch badal gaya,december wohi raha
kuch yadon ka khoo baha,december wohi raha

halki si ikk khalish dil mai machal gai
ikk an-dekha malal or december wohi raha

dil jal gaya tha shayad,lafzon ki aanch se
her taraf ik aag per december wohi raha

kuch karab bhari ratain or ansoo be mol se
sab kuch badal gaya,december wohi raha

hasrat rahi k hum bhi unhain mehboob hotey
hasrat he rehi ye jese december wohi raha

kandhon pe ik shawl or coffe ki talkhian
yadon bhara kashkol or december wohi raha

li mosmon ne angrrai or pal mai badal gaye
ik mai pashemaan sa or december wohi raha…

[Sannan]

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hasrat rahi k hum bhi unhain mehboob hotey
hasrat he rehi ye jese december wohi raha

Shazia g ittni khoubsurat ghazal… no doubt this is one of your best ghazal in which every thing is perfect

bus zara khoo ko KhooN likh daitien to zara jaldi samjh aa jati … Anyway it was awesome …I like poetry on December too much and this one will move in to my fav poetry

[Shazia_Arif]

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@Sannan

hasrat rahi k hum bhi unhain mehboob hotey
hasrat he rehi ye jese december wohi raha

Shazia g ittni khoubsurat ghazal… no doubt this is one of your best ghazal in which every thing is perfect

bus zara khoo ko KhooN likh daitien to zara jaldi samjh aa jati … Anyway it was awesome …I like poetry on December too much and this one will move in to my fav poetry

thanx Sannaan but agar khoon likh deti to wo khoon he pronounce hota…noon ghunna likhne ki koshish ki hai.

[KKF]

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@Shazia_Arif

thanx Sannaan but agar khoon likh deti to wo khoon he pronounce hota…noon ghunna likhne ki koshish ki hai.

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bahooot Khoob…achchhii kaavish hai…meri jaanib se DheroN mubaarakbaadeN pesh-e-khidmat haiN.

mere Khayaal se Sannan kaa kahna thaa k Harf-e-“noon Ghunna” ko N se zaahir karen roman urdu ke transliteration scheme ke taHet. mujeh bhii yehii diqqat pesh aayii thii k sarsarii taur par maiN ne us lafz ko “Khoo” paRhaa ba_ma’nii Khaslat/nature ke paRhaa phir jab ma’nii na_daarad paayaa to phir se Ghaur kiyaa to samajh meN aayaa k yeh lafz dar Haqeeqat “KhooN” hai.**

[IS]

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Wah

[Amarbail]

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Zabardast …:k:

[Amal]

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@Shazia_Arif

halki si ikk khalish dil mai machal gai
ikk an-dekha malal or december wohi raha

kandhon pe ik shawl or coffe ki talkhian
yadon bhara kashkol or december wohi raha

Zabardast. Shawl aur coffee wala scene acha laga :k:

[Shazia_Arif]

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@Khalil KhaaN FaaKhta

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bahooot Khoob…achchhii kaavish hai…meri jaanib se DheroN mubaarakbaadeN pesh-e-khidmat haiN.

mere Khayaal se Sannan kaa kahna thaa k Harf-e-“noon Ghunna” ko N se zaahir karen roman urdu ke transliteration scheme ke taHet. mujeh bhii yehii diqqat pesh aayii thii k sarsarii taur par maiN ne us lafz ko “Khoo” paRhaa ba_ma’nii Khaslat/nature ke paRhaa phir jab ma’nii na_daarad paayaa to phir se Ghaur kiyaa to samajh meN aayaa k yeh lafz dar Haqeeqat “KhooN” hai.**

g baja farmaya…next timei’ll b careful.

[Shazia_Arif]

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thanx IS n Amer g.

[Shazia_Arif]

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@Amal

Zabardast. Shawl aur coffee wala scene acha laga :k:

thanx for liking…thandd mai yehi scene sab se best hota hai

[punjabi_kuri_1]

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nice :k:

[Shazia_Arif]

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thanx p.k.

[jiia]

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bohat khubsurat shazia

[FusionMiddleware]

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:k:

[Aryaan]

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Very Nice Shazia..:k:

[Shazia_Arif]

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thank you every one.

[heart_lover]

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Shazia..:k:

[rajey]

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Aur bhi maheenay the teri yaadon me ronay kay,
Par dil me bawaalo ka silsila, December wohi raha

[Shazia_Arif]

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thanx heart lover n raje…ur shaer is bohat alaa raje.

[Sannan]

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@Shazia_Arif

thanx Sannaan but agar khoon likh deti to wo khoon he pronounce hota…noon ghunna likhne ki koshish ki hai.

Khali khanexplained this thing in a nice manner. Hope you will take care of it.