hasrat rahi k hum bhi unhain mehboob hotey
hasrat he rehi ye jese december wohi raha
Shazia g ittni khoubsurat ghazal… no doubt this is one of your best ghazal in which every thing is perfect
bus zara khoo ko KhooN likh daitien to zara jaldi samjh aa jati … Anyway it was awesome …I like poetry on December too much and this one will move in to my fav poetry
thanx Sannaan but agar khoon likh deti to wo khoon he pronounce hota...noon ghunna likhne ki koshish ki hai.
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bahooot Khoob...achchhii kaavish hai...meri jaanib se DheroN mubaarakbaadeN pesh-e-khidmat haiN.
mere Khayaal se Sannan kaa kahna thaa k Harf-e-"noon Ghunna" ko N se zaahir karen roman urdu ke transliteration scheme ke taHet. mujeh bhii yehii diqqat pesh aayii thii k sarsarii taur par maiN ne us lafz ko "Khoo" paRhaa ba_ma'nii Khaslat/nature ke paRhaa phir jab ma'nii na_daarad paayaa to phir se Ghaur kiyaa to samajh meN aayaa k yeh lafz dar Haqeeqat "KhooN" hai.**
mere Khayaal se Sannan kaa kahna thaa k Harf-e-"noon Ghunna" ko N se zaahir karen roman urdu ke transliteration scheme ke taHet. mujeh bhii yehii diqqat pesh aayii thii k sarsarii taur par maiN ne us lafz ko "Khoo" paRhaa ba_ma'nii Khaslat/nature ke paRhaa phir jab ma'nii na_daarad paayaa to phir se Ghaur kiyaa to samajh meN aayaa k yeh lafz dar Haqeeqat "KhooN" hai.**
