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Oh my God Chishmato. Inthna parh liqh kar aur Alama Iqbal ki poetry mie phd karnay kay bad zahir hie yahi liqho gay. Great stuff, aur itnaa lamba and u made me recall pretty feelings of december in Muree, with the smell of pine and log on fire and all the good stuff. childhood memories 
thanks!
Holly krap though some of those verses were so darn blue 
(I read only the cheery ones) 
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nice nice niceeeee
hey aq improvement aarahi hey tuadi poetry meyyy :D jalaing
anwaar hotey kahan ho ajkal bhai?
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Ghazalooo: well, I saw messages on ORKUT... I do not go there almost never now ...
DB: apnaY jazbaat ko Qaaboo maiN rakho please :D
rabika: jub chaahaY hum ko aawaaz dau
hum thaY jahaaN, hum haiN wahaaN :-)
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I am talking about this: >>>> **Holly krap though some of those verses were so darn blue **
what were you thinking 
???
anyway, here is:
Kalaam-e-Shaair Ba Zubaan-e-Shaair… I was having too much time in hand lately tonight 
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^Ok, I know this section is for the real budhee budhee serious serious badroohain of gup, but after reading the blues of ur dec poem, and then listening to ur stuff just made it sound so much more different. So pardon me but I gotta do this…
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kahaa thaa jazbaat par qaabooo rakhnaa 
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Mayn doobara sirf yeh dekhnay ayee houn kai yeh ground hog day ki tarah ka december guzra bhee hai ya naheen.
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abhi tau Decemebr aanaY maiN taqreeban 9+ maheenaY haiN.. abhi tau aanaY kaa intezaar karo phir guzarnaY Ka :p
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Nice poem AQ. Kuch ziyada hee lamba naheen ho gaya hai? :p
Is December ke romance ne kaiyon ko ghera hua hai... ;)
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Bhai December aur hamaara abb tau Choli Daaman kaa saath hai… MaiN tau abb shaadi bhee :insha: December maiN hee karooN gaa LOL…
jald hee 
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Anwaar Qureshi, this is really beautiful. You are talented.
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yaar december guzar raha hai to guzarnay do, january ka bi to haq hai na
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Aq'l yeh keh rahi thee
bud duaa yeh daY rahi thee
tu bhee meraY Rafeeq!
dekhaY wohi sitam
tu naY jo kiYe karam
kuch maaloom tujh ko ho
sang-e-dil mom kuch tau ho
khabar kuch milli hai
kaY tu ae Dost!
December kee in
thanDee fizaaoN maiN
ik ghum seh rahaa hai
udaasiyaaN jhel rahaa hai
Tanhaa reh gayaa hai
Dosti kay samander maiN
BeY rehm mojoN kaY thapeRon maiN
dostiyaaN kho chukaa hai
Zindagi ki ye taareek saa'ataiN
uss waqt bhee ayaaN theeN
kaY jub!
December Guzar rahaa thaa
aur aaj bhee ayaaN haiN
kaY jub!
tu bhee keh raha hai
Tanhaa tu reh gayaa hai
haan!
Sunn lo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
December Guzar rahaa hai
Anwaar Qureshi
12:16 AM 12/8/2005
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I dont know if you wrote this as fiction or if it has some real meaning to your life, but either way its very stupid of you to give budua to anyone, you shouldnt even do it to your enemies let to someone you had feelings for at one point. Sad...really sad...the last thing i expected from a decent guy.
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Barfee:
I have no clue where you see the bud-dua in my poem…
You have to read carefully actually before calling a person stupid whom you dunno a bit about.
This is what is called “taking things out of context”…
I’m not obliged to answer your concern but since, it questions my sanity and it questions my feelings, let me rephrase and help you understand a bit about poetry (even though I do not claim to know a lot about poetry ever…)
The portion that you copied is fine and exactly how I wrote but I am amazed to see that you have totally ignored few lines above that:
Dil yeh keh rahaa thaa
duaa yeh daY rahaa thaa
teri zindagi maiN ae dost!
aisaa December aaYe kabhi naa
Tu Kabhi **December ko Alwida **kahai naa
Dosti ko buraa kabhi kahai naa
naa hee tu kabhi Tanhaa ho
naa kabhi dard-e-aashnaa ho
You may wanna use some part of your intelligence on word “DIL” and the related bold dua in that portion.
Let me explain you further that, it is human emotions that whenever Love is the subject of matter, it is always heart which is considered the trustworthy and loyal to one’s self..
My explaining of bud-dua by Aq’l is something which is natural to human nature but it is always love that becomes the winner over the hate… The circumstances in life sometimes let your AQ’L think negatively but heart is your better friend in such cases…
In case, you failed to notice the last part:
Zindagi ki ye taareek saa’ataiN
uss waqt bhee ayaaN theeN
kaY jub!
December Guzar rahaa thaa
aur aaj bhee ayaaN haiN
kaY jub!
tu bhee keh raha hai
Tanhaa tu reh gayaa hai
haan!
Sunn lo!!!
My usage of word “Sunn lo!!!” clearly tells you the hurtful feelings of the poet upon receiving a bad news… If you can, please relate it to the DUA of DIL and upon not getting that dua heard, it is an element of sadness that makes the poet to scream in pain and tears… take a look at the sentence : Zindagi ki ye taareek saa’ataiN
If current situation is as gladeful for the poet as you ought to feel then it can’t be Zindagi ki ye taareek saa’ataiN or can it be?
I did not want to make a tashreeh of my own piece of work but wrong understanding of anything demands its explanation…
Baaqi Allah:swt: diloN kay haal behtar jaantaa hai. I always leave everything to ALLAH:swt: at the end. He knows and He is the Judge.
PS: poetry is fiction based on one’s observations and or experience.
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I already told you where i see it. To me it sounds like you wished she wouldn’t have the same thing happen to her but u r happy that it did. Anyways I dont get the whole urdu gumgeeen poetry things anyways. That part jumped out so i pointed it out. Like you said Allah knows best.
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whatever gave you that idea. always look for bad words and forget the meaning 
but anyway, aap ko agar bud-duaa deni hai, tau you are most welcome.