Re: Death in Sujood on Her Wedding Night
One should makeup story which is logical and can help people deduce logical conclusion.
Sa’adi and Roomi have many religious made up stories those storeis touch hearts of the folks who read them. Those kinds of stories teach you a lesson and are much more effective in getting the point across and that is the point of a story .
Also made up story should be befitting the audience , if it is not it will have the same fate this story had here.
Any story which is lacking these two basic principles of story telling will fall flat on the hearts and minds of audience.
If you wish I can improve upon this story and make it more befitting the audience and take out all the kinks of this story and you will be saying Subhan Allah , Mashallah.
But it is too late for it now. May be some other time I will open a new thread with improvements in this same story or some new story more befitting the audience.