Dayaar-e-yaar ki galyoN meiN ja ke rakh aaey

Amal · July 11, 2003, 7:24pm

Dayaar-e-yaar ki galyoN meiN ja ke rakh aaey
hamaarey haath meiN jitney wafa ke moti they

duwa ke lafzoN ko taskeen mil rahi thi ajab
falak ke hoNt par shaaed nida ke moti they

dil jhoom uttha tha kuch reshmi sey nagmoN par
hamaari sama’at meiN mehki sada ke moti they

guloN ney rakh leeye choom kar aqeedat ke saath
sehar ke haath meiN jitney saba ke moti they

rutoN ney daal deeye bastiyoN ki jholi meiN
fiza ke haath meiN jitney hawa ke moti they

shab-e-muraad ki soorat meiN dhal gaey saarey
duwaaoN ke hoNtoN pe jo iltija ke moti they

ik rakh-rakhaao ney us ko saNwaar rakha tha
us ki har baat meiN anokhi adaa ke moti they

hum apni yaadoN ki maala meiN sab piro laey
us ki nigaah meiN jitney haya ke moti they!

By: Amal

jasmeen · July 11, 2003, 7:31pm

Re: Dayaar-e-yaar ki galyoN meiN ja ke rakh aaey

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*Originally posted by Amal: *

Dayaar-e-yaar ki galyoN meiN ja ke rakh aaey
hamaarey haath meiN jitney wafa ke moti they

duwa ke lafzoN ko taskeen mil rahi thi ajab
falak ke hoNt par shaaed nida ke moti they

zaber10 superrrrr piece of work:k:

Pramod · July 11, 2003, 8:45pm

Re: Dayaar-e-yaar ki galyoN meiN ja ke rakh aaey

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Amal: *

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Dayaar-e-yaar ki galyoN meiN ja ke rakh aaey
hamaarey haath meiN jitney wafa ke moti they

guloN ney rakh leeye choom kar aqeedat ke saath
sehar ke haath meiN jitney saba ke moti they

shab-e-muraad ki soorat meiN dhal gaey saarey
duwaaoN ke hoNtoN pe jo iltija ke moti they

hum apni yaadoN ki maala meiN sab piro laey
us ki nigaah meiN jitney haya ke moti they! **

By: Amal
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Amal,

Once again a very beautiful ghazal from your pen. Ye ashaars to mujhe behad pasand aaye.
dheroN daad kubul karo es behtareen ghazal pe.

NikamiJano · July 11, 2003, 9:38pm

Re: Dayaar-e-yaar ki galyoN meiN ja ke rakh aaey

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Amal: *

guloN ney rakh leeye choom kar aqeedat ke saath
sehar ke haath meiN jitney saba ke moti they

rutoN ney daal deeye bastiyoN ki jholi meiN
fiza ke haath meiN jitney hawa ke moti they

shab-e-muraad ki soorat meiN dhal gaey saarey
duwaaoN ke hoNtoN pe jo iltija ke moti they

ik rakh-rakhaao ney us ko saNwaar rakha tha
us ki har baat meiN anokhi adaa ke moti they

hum apni yaadoN ki maala meiN sab piro laey
us ki nigaah meiN jitney haya ke moti they

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Beautiful Aymal thorey se lufz hain hamarey pass kahnay k leay k bohat khubsurat hia ap ki ye BHI gazal....like always :)

PS: welcome back

Muslim_Queen · July 11, 2003, 9:39pm

Re: Dayaar-e-yaar ki galyoN meiN ja ke rakh aaey

Its lovelyyyyyyyyyyyy.app ki poems ki toh baat hi kuch aur hai.

_Passionate · July 11, 2003, 11:08pm

zabardast …:k:

undefined · July 11, 2003, 11:37pm

Buhat aallaa !!

ghazal_kisi_ke · July 11, 2003, 11:47pm

Re: Dayaar-e-yaar ki galyoN meiN ja ke rakh aaey

lajavab:k::k::k::k:
thanks a lot for sharing:flower1:

chand_chehra · July 12, 2003, 4:33am

wah bohat khoob :k:

Aceones · July 12, 2003, 4:43am

Re: Dayaar-e-yaar ki galyoN meiN ja ke rakh aaey

one more beautiful ghazal by u :k:

Amarbail1 · July 12, 2003, 4:54am

Bahut lajwaab …:k:

SuraJ · July 12, 2003, 5:41am

hum apni yaadoN ki maala meiN sab piro laey
us ki nigaah meiN jitney haya ke moti they!

bahut khoob HAYA lafz bahut khoobsurat lagta hai mujhey thanx 4 sharing

Eastern_Thoughts · July 12, 2003, 10:15am

Amal....
do you know aap kay leay Ahmed Faraz nay keya kaha hay ?

he says.....

sunaa hai bole to baato.n se phuul jha.Date hai.n
ye baat hai to chalo baat kar ke dekhate hai.n

:)

very nice use of words ... and i just notice kay kaafi names aaye hain iss chooti si poem main ;)

u see this is also bit funny (though i know what it means actually, its beautiful shair but just see it in other was )

guloN ney rakh leeye choom kar aqeedat ke saath
sehar ke haath meiN jitney saba ke moti they

Sehar kay haath main Saba kay mooti, aur phooloon nay unhain Aqeedat say rukh leya :D

Capricorn · July 12, 2003, 12:09pm

Buhat khoob Amal :k:

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · July 12, 2003, 4:39pm

Beautiful hay:-)

Dilsay · July 12, 2003, 5:11pm

hum apni yaadoN ki maala meiN sab piro laey
us ki nigaah meiN jitney haya ke moti they!

wonderful... simply wonderful...

Koyal · July 12, 2003, 6:04pm

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*Originally posted by Eastern Thoughts: *
Amal....
do you know aap kay leay Ahmed Faraz nay keya kaha hay ?

he says.....

sunaa hai bole to baato.n se phuul jha.Date hai.n
ye baat hai to chalo baat kar ke dekhate hai.n

:)

very nice use of words ... and i just notice kay kaafi names aaye hain iss chooti si poem main ;)

u see this is also bit funny (though i know what it means actually, its beautiful shair but just see it in other was )

guloN ney rakh leeye choom kar aqeedat ke saath
sehar ke haath meiN jitney saba ke moti they

Sehar kay haath main Saba kay mooti, aur phooloon nay unhain Aqeedat say rukh leya :D

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ye be pooch lejiey gha k Sehar ne saba se pooch k motion ko .....:p

Lamhay · July 12, 2003, 6:05pm

wah bahut khoob!

Black_Mamba · July 12, 2003, 10:38pm

Re: Dayaar-e-yaar ki galyoN meiN ja ke rakh aaey

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Originally posted by Amal: *

Dayaar-e-yaar ki galyoN meiN ja ke rakh aaey
hamaarey haath meiN jitney wafa ke moti they
**By: Amal*
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great ,
excellent.

the rest of the poem is good too. but this is .... WoW

_Masoom_Muskaan · July 13, 2003, 10:27am

amal bhae jan wow:k: