Amal
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Kinaar-e-aab kharra khud sey keh raha hey koi
gumaaN guzarta hey ye shakhs dosra hay koi
hawa ney tor ke patta zameeN pe pheiNka hey
ke shab ki jheel meiN patther giraa diya hey koi
darakht raah meiN bataaeiN hila hila kar haath
ke qaafley sey musaafir bicharr gaya hey koi
makaan aur nahi hey badal gaya hey makeeN
ufaq wohi hey magar chaand dosra hey koi
faseel-e-jism par taaza lahu ke cheeNtey heiN
hudood-e-waqt sey aagey nikal gaya hey koi
Shakeb deep sey lehra rahey heiN palkoN per
dayaar-e-chashm meiN kya aaj rat’jaga hey koi!
By: Shakeb Jalali
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EEMAAN
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Re: Dayaar-e-chashm meiN kya aaj rat'jaga hey koi!
wah,,bohat khoob..
Re: Dayaar-e-chashm meiN kya aaj rat'jaga hey koi!
hawa ney tor ke patta zameeN pe pheiNka hey
ke shab ki jheel meiN patther giraa diya hey koi
darakht raah meiN bataaeiN hila hila kar haath
ke qaafley sey musaafir bicharr gaya hey koi
faseel-e-jism par taaza lahu ke cheeNtey heiN
hudood-e-waqt sey aagey nikal gaya hey koi
Shakeb deep sey lehra rahey heiN palkoN per
dayaar-e-chashm meiN kya aaj rat'jaga hey koi!
By: Shakeb Jalali
Buhat khoob Amal thanks for sharing :-)
Re: Dayaar-e-chashm meiN kya aaj rat'jaga hey koi!
Nice one.. thx for sharing amal ..
Re: Dayaar-e-chashm meiN kya aaj rat'jaga hey koi!
makaan aur nahi hey badal gaya hey makeeN
ufaq wohi hey magar chaand dosra hey koi
nice one Aymal thanks 4 sharing with us :)
Re: Dayaar-e-chashm meiN kya aaj rat'jaga hey koi!
;) see am here :)
Re: Dayaar-e-chashm meiN kya aaj rat'jaga hey koi!
Shakeb deep sey lehra rahey heiN palkoN per
dayaar-e-chashm meiN kya aaj rat'jaga hey koi!
buhat alllla
Re: Dayaar-e-chashm meiN kya aaj rat'jaga hey koi!
Nice ghazal...Amal...thnx 4 sharing....!
Re: Dayaar-e-chashm meiN kya aaj rat'jaga hey koi!
Bahut hi gahri gahri baatin kurtay hain ye shair loog tu :)
Nice Selection Amal! :)
Re: Dayaar-e-chashm meiN kya aaj rat’jaga hey koi!
Buhut khub Amal bhai :k:
Re: Dayaar-e-chashm meiN kya aaj rat'jaga hey koi!
buhat achi sharing hai
Amal
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Re: Dayaar-e-chashm meiN kya aaj rat’jaga hey koi!
Thanx a lot guys for appreciating this piece
