DASTAN-E-HAYAAT...

Shazia_Arif · February 4, 2012, 8:35am

harf harf likha tha jo
usay boond boond mita gaye
mera ghrur,mera maan tha jo
usay rakh sa urra gaye
meri siskian ajeeb thin
jo seene main he ghutt gain
phir anso-on ne kamzor sa
ankh ka bharam rakha
wo na beh sakay phir ankh se
jinhen dil pe tum gira gaye
dil k purane zakhmon main
ik or izafa ho gaya
jo mundmil huay sadion baad
unhen phir nasoor bana gaye
mujhe kiun gila ho ap se
mera intekhaab tu anmol tha
mere pachtawe or malamaten
usay or nayaab bana gaye…

muqawwee123 · February 4, 2012, 8:43am

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wow. Aapa ki kia hi baat hai. :k:

Shazia_Arif · February 4, 2012, 8:57am

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chalen ab jaldi se bata den kya bat hai mera khana thandda ho rha hai…jox apart itne dher sare logon ko daad dene k liye bula lia tu men tu heran e reh gai k ye ap ko itni pasand ai :hinna:

muqawwee123 · February 4, 2012, 9:10am

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Bus ji dekh len.. saday naal raho ge to aish karogay, zindagi se sare mazay cash karogay:)

Jokes apart, nice seection of words and beautiful choice of words from our sonay ke dil wali aapa.

Shazia_Arif · February 4, 2012, 9:21am

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awww soney ki dil wali keh dia...barri meharbani paen ab iss bar ap ka vote pakka hamare muhalle se :@:

muqawwee123 · February 4, 2012, 9:21am

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Thanks target achieved :)

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · February 4, 2012, 1:19pm

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Nice :k:

Hatim_Jawed · February 4, 2012, 3:35pm

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Wahhhhh!!!! bahot khoob !!! dhero'n daad qubool farmaae'n Shazia jee!

UZ · February 4, 2012, 3:39pm

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Shazia aap ki kaya baat hai :k:

Hatim_Jawed · February 4, 2012, 3:45pm

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Wahhh waaa !!! wahhh waaa !!! kya baat hai Shazia jee !!!! dhero'n daad qubool farmae'n.

waleedhbk · February 4, 2012, 5:12pm

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Wah Apa Kiya He Kamal Likha Apne

muqawwee123 · February 4, 2012, 8:09pm

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:hinna:maine itne ghor se padhi per phir bhi mujhse ‘kamal’ miss hogaya.

Shazia_Arif · February 5, 2012, 7:53am

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thanx every one :)

Shazia_Arif · February 5, 2012, 7:54am

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koi nai paen…ap ne daad dene k liye jo khandaan post kia hai wo b kamal se kam nai

Shazia_Arif · February 5, 2012, 7:58am

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thanx paen per pata nai q ap poetry ko nasar men likh jate hen,ab dekhen yahan b kya hal ker dia bachi dukhi ho gai :hinna:

saadat_tahir · February 5, 2012, 3:33pm

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wow…same from me too…
yes all the smileys from me too

be happy

sat

Sannan · February 6, 2012, 7:12am

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kia baat hay Shazia :cobra: baray arsay baad aamad hoi hay kalam key keep it up

Shazia_Arif · February 6, 2012, 7:28am

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thanx n sho shweet of you Saad g :)

Shazia_Arif · February 6, 2012, 7:31am

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han g kafi arse badd..last time tab hui thi jab ap hamare han pati mangne aye the or ab hui rat ko jb ap ka chotta beta istari mangne aya tha bohat shukriah.

Sannan · February 6, 2012, 1:29pm

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really