dasht-o-zindaan ki hawas, chaak-e-giraybaan ki talaash

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Ali_2 October 25, 2007, 7:17am 1

dil k aiwaan may liyeh gul-shuda shammoN ki qitaar
noor-e-khursheed say sehmay huway uktaayeh huway
husn-e-mehboob k saiyaal tasavvur ki tarha
apni taareeki ko bhainchay huway, liptaayeh huway
ghaayat-e-sood-o-ziyaan, soorat-e-aghaaz o ma’aal
vohi be-sood tajassus, vohi bekaar sawaal

muzmahil saa’at-e-imroz ki be-rangi say
yaad-e-maazi say ghameeN, dasht-e-firdaa say nidhaal
tishna ifkaar jo taskeen nahi paatay hain
sookhta ashk jo aankhon may nahi aatay hain
ik karDa dard jo geet may dhalta he nahi
dil k tareek shighaafoN say nikalta he nahi
aur ik uljhi hui mohoom c darmaaN ki talaash
dasht-o-zindaan ki hawas, chaak-e-giraybaan ki talaash

redidentity October 25, 2007, 7:57am 2

Re: dasht-o-zindaan ki hawas, chaak-e-giraybaan ki talaash

very nice..

Ali_2 October 25, 2007, 8:33am 3

Re: dasht-o-zindaan ki hawas, chaak-e-giraybaan ki talaash

Thanks :)

Precious_Khan October 25, 2007, 8:56am 4

Re: dasht-o-zindaan ki hawas, chaak-e-giraybaan ki talaash

Buhat Achchay :~)

_Masoom_Muskaan October 25, 2007, 9:08am 5

Re: dasht-o-zindaan ki hawas, chaak-e-giraybaan ki talaash

:k:

Ali_2 October 25, 2007, 10:23am 6

Re: dasht-o-zindaan ki hawas, chaak-e-giraybaan ki talaash

thanks :)

who spends more on wedding?

tum_bin_1 October 25, 2007, 10:52am 7

Re: dasht-o-zindaan ki hawas, chaak-e-giraybaan ki talaash

Nice One :)

~**~ Tussi Baray ----- Ho ~~~~ ~**~

SJ October 25, 2007, 12:40pm 8

Re: dasht-o-zindaan ki hawas, chaak-e-giraybaan ki talaash

Bohat he zabardust Nazam..................

~10 saal baad~

Ali_2 October 25, 2007, 12:46pm 9

Re: dasht-o-zindaan ki hawas, chaak-e-giraybaan ki talaash

:)

SJ October 25, 2007, 12:56pm 10

Re: dasht-o-zindaan ki hawas, chaak-e-giraybaan ki talaash

^wat does it mean brother????

~10 saal baad~

Ali_2 October 25, 2007, 1:00pm 11

Re: dasht-o-zindaan ki hawas, chaak-e-giraybaan ki talaash

nothing u want me to say thanks

bheegiyaad October 25, 2007, 1:04pm 12

Re: dasht-o-zindaan ki hawas, chaak-e-giraybaan ki talaash

cool stuff!!!:)

SJ October 25, 2007, 1:05pm 13

Re: dasht-o-zindaan ki hawas, chaak-e-giraybaan ki talaash

No...........Never.........
Bro ur stuff is worth reading.........
Simply superb!!!

NikamiJano October 25, 2007, 1:32pm 14

Re: dasht-o-zindaan ki hawas, chaak-e-giraybaan ki talaash

aur ik uljhi hui mohoom c darmaaN ki talaash
dasht-o-zindaan ki hawas, chaak-e-giraybaan ki talaash
nice sharing ALi :)

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Ali_2 October 25, 2007, 5:58pm 15

Re: dasht-o-zindaan ki hawas, chaak-e-giraybaan ki talaash

thanks NikamiJano ji :)