Darwesh ka kalam bazaban-e-GN

goodnews · September 25, 2008, 4:50am

Usne Jab Kaha Mujhse
Geet Ek Suna Do Na,
Sard Hai Fiza Dil Ki
Aag Tum Laga Do Na
Kiya Haseen Tewar The’y
Kiya Lateef Jazba Tha
Aarzoo Thi Hasrat Thi
Hukm Tha Taqaza Tha
Aur Josh e Masti Main
Saaz Utha Liya Maine
Cher Hi Diya Aakhir
Naghma e Wafaa Main Ne !!!

Sajalina · September 25, 2008, 4:56am

Re: Darwesh ka kalam bazaban-e-GN

Nice little poem. Good job GN.

goodnews · September 25, 2008, 4:58am

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Shukriya Sajo:blush:

Shab-e-Hijar · September 25, 2008, 5:06am

awaz nahi arahi mujhay :ASA:

goodnews · September 25, 2008, 5:19am

Re: Darwesh ka kalam bazaban-e-GN

^^ Kan saf kerwao apny:P waisy bhi agar main awaz tyz or zordar ker rahi thi tu sach:hehe: Nazm nahi rijziya(jang ky moqy per hony wali shairi) ashaar lag rahy thy:D

dhobi_bhai · September 25, 2008, 2:00pm

Poetry section sey bahir us zamanay mein koi dunya nahin thi. :P Aapki bhi taang kheench li gayi. :P

Gunnu Jee :biggthumb

goodnews · September 25, 2008, 6:42pm

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^^:Dshukar hy tang hi khynchi ‘oper’ nahi bhijwa diya:wink:

Jhanjharewali · September 25, 2008, 6:51pm

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Gunnu, tumhara aur Muddiji ka online mushaira competition kerwate hein. kya khayal? :D

goodnews · September 25, 2008, 7:07pm

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Idea acha hy magar buhat sy muashrti o ikhlaqi masaail paida na ho jain:hehe:

Jhanjharewali · September 25, 2008, 7:29pm

iss se behtar publicity kya ho sakti hei uss thread ki

sach bolo tum Muddiji ke saath muqable se ghabra to nehi rehi ho:hehe:

goodnews · September 25, 2008, 7:31pm

yeh anhoni is sadi main tu nahi ho sakti

Jhanjharewali · September 25, 2008, 7:37pm

acha phir Muddiji se rabta ker ke koi prograam banati huun :biggthumb

goodnews · September 25, 2008, 7:38pm

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GuL-e-Tasbeeh · September 25, 2008, 7:46pm

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Wah Ji aap ney tou kamaal kar diyaa :-)

goodnews · September 25, 2008, 9:39pm

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Nawazish:adab arz kerta smiley:

bheegiyaad · September 25, 2008, 10:34pm

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khushkhabree chaa gaey ho :k:

goodnews · September 26, 2008, 1:24am

Re: Darwesh ka kalam bazaban-e-GN

Main kiya ghata hon ju cha gai:D
waisy “Kalam-e-shair bazabany shair” hona chahiy tum shr-o-gupshup waly apni awaz main kalam kion nahi sunaty VG main:aq:

sameenji · September 26, 2008, 5:21am

Chaa gaye ho jee

bheegiyaad · September 26, 2008, 1:11pm

hamein sharam atee hai

goodnews · September 26, 2008, 1:17pm

Jis ne ki sharam os ky phooty karam:fifa: