Daroon-e-Behr-e-Dil....!!(Baqalam kHud)

Aik Aaddad Ghazal le kar Hazirr hooN, Umeed hai pasand aaigi

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Arz kiya hai :-

Daroon-e-Behr-e-Dil Andesha-e-TooFaaN nahiN rakhaa
Tahaffuz kaa sar-e-Mushkil koi SaamaaN nahiN rakhaa

(Daroon=andar) (behr=samundar) (andeshaa=kHtare ka khaiyaal)(tahffuz= safty) (sar-e-Mushkil= mushkil parhne par)(samaan= instruments)

**Kisi Aaaine kaa hamne koi EhsaaN nahiN rakha
YaqeeN aisaa hai Dil pe, Aaankh per ImaaN nahiN rakhaa

Tere kHat teri TassweereiN maiN apne Pass kioUN rakhooN
Bicharh Jaane ka tujh se koi bhi ImkaaN nahiN rakhaa

Baseraa kar ya isko cHorh de yeh teri marzi hai
Keh Dil ko Dil hi rakhaa hai kabhi ZindaaN nahiN rakhaa**

(ZindaaN= Jail , Qaid`khaana)

**Meri Himmat bandhaati hai yeh meri Aaablapaai
Talaash-e-yaar ko maiN ne Azaab-e-JaaN nahiN rakhaa **

(Aablaa-Paai= Paoun meiN chaaloN ka honaa)


**Ab kahin boltaa nahiN gHaib jo kholtaa nahiN
Aisaa agar kHudaa tumne banaa lyiaa to keya
Jo hai kHuda kaa aadmi uski hai Saltanat alag
Zulm ne Zulm se agar Haath milaa liyaa to keyaa
**

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Nice Ghazal…
lekin aik baat bataon ??
mujeh samajh nahi ayi

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Yeh main kia dekh rehi ho aik aur new ghazal…wah bohot khoob…bhaateeji jee jab aap ko samajh main hi nahin ahee to aap neh nice kion kaha

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Khair aap keh uncle keh isliye laghta hai unhe kafha nahin karna chahtee ho ghee right

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* Baseraa kar ya isko cHorh de yeh teri marzi hai Keh Dil ko Dil hi rakhaa hai kabhi ZindaaN nahiN rakhaa

very nice1

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MÙhb@t kÀ ÃnÒkhå SîÌSîÎã Hãï
KÆhî ý@$®Úb Káhï kîBàÎå H@ï

ARYE aap ki ainak ka nomber abhi tak Theek nahin huwaa yeh Bhaateeji nahiN Behan
hai Completely Incomplete Bhaateji to barhi zaaheen hai ussko samajh ajati hai, aaakHir Zaheen ho bhi kiouN, Chori to bagHair Zahanat ke nahiN chalti na LOllz !
wesse shukriaa Ghazal Passand akrne kaa..!!

Completely Incomplete shukriaa Behnaa

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..chalo Theek agar nahIn bhi samajh aai to kHer, because i know keh aap ke paass Samajh nahIn ahi, isslyie maiN buraa nahin manaata

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chand_chehra Shukriaaa Jazaakallah


**Ab kahin boltaa nahiN gHaib jo kholtaa nahiN
Aisaa agar kHudaa tumne banaa lyiaa to keya
Jo hai kHuda kaa aadmi uski hai Saltanat alag
Zulm ne Zulm se agar Haath milaa liyaa zo keyaa
**

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V nice

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~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

The first two misras are outstanding...Very good job...You can do shaeeri on the lines of Faiz if you try...Good job again...


Better to be wrong than have no opinion.

shukriaa Nikami jano

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**Ham Ehl-e-Qafas tanhaa bhi nahiN har roz Naseem-e-Subah-e-Watan
YaadoN se Mo`attar aati hai AshkoN se Munawwar jaati hai **

Thanx Lajawaab

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shukriaa iss pazeerai kaa
lekin jahaN baat Faiz sahib ki aai to apna hi aik sher jawaban arz karooNgaa…aap per mera mazmoon Wazeh hojayega

**Raah meiN ruknaa tha kab, sochaa nahiN
Shauq-e-Manzil meiN yeh Dhabb,sochaa nahiN

Sochtaa hooN saamne ki kHwaahisheN
Mudaa-e-Betalab sochaa nahiN**


**Ham Ehl-e-Qafas tanhaa bhi nahiN har roz Naseem-e-Subah-e-Watan
YaadoN se Mo`attar aati hai AshkoN se Munawwar jaati hai **

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Originally posted by Tassneef:
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Thanx Lajawaab

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shukriaa iss pazeerai kaa
lekin jahaN baat Faiz sahib ki aai to apna hi aik sher jawaban arz karooNgaa…aap per mera mazmoon Wazeh hojayega

**Raah meiN ruknaa tha kab, sochaa nahiN
Shauq-e-Manzil meiN yeh Dhabb,sochaa nahiN

Sochtaa hooN saamne ki kHwaahisheN
Mudaa-e-Betalab sochaa nahiN**

Yeh aap ka apna irshaad hai

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[This message has been edited by Nayab (edited June 30, 2002).]

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Originally posted by Nayab:
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Wah wah…Excellent boss…You make a fine poet…But a request, please don’t dawdle too much in ishqiaa shaeeri…We have too many of them…And there are those like me that have ‘maslays’ of their own rather than thinking about the ‘zulf’…Ghalib by the way is my sleeping pill…Most times when he dawdles too…

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… Good job again…


Better to be wrong than have no opinion.

Jee Naayaab yeh mera hi Kalaam hai..!!

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) …MaiN na Faiz baNna chaahta hooN na Meer na Ghalib na Inshaa..maiN apni Pehchaan aap banNa chaahta hooN , magar Faiz, Meer Ghalib-o-Inshaa Jaissaaa ..kiouNkeh wo jo haiN wo apne apne Aaakash ke Sitaare haiN aur meri Manzil Suriyaa Sitaare se bhi kahiN aagey haiN…Baaqi uss Sitaare tak pohnchane ke lyie mere liye aik i Raastaa hai jiski kHaak Ghalib, Meer, Inshaa aur Faiz sahibaan jaise Shoaraa ke QadmoN se Munawar hui..maiN unki Roshneee meiN aage barhnaa chaahta hooN kiouNkeh DR Mohammad Illaama Iqbaal farmaate haiN:-

**Tu ShaaheeN hai,hai parwaaz kaam teraa
Tere Saamne AasmaaN aur bhi haiN **

Iss lyie jab tak maiN zindaa hooN mazeed se mazeed ki talaash meiN KoshaaN rahouNgaa

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aap duaaoN mein yaad rakhiye gaa

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inshallah aapko aik Din iss Dost per FakHaar zaroor hogaa

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**Ham Ehl-e-Qafas tanhaa bhi nahiN har roz Naseem-e-Subah-e-Watan
YaadoN se Mo`attar aati hai AshkoN se Munawwar jaati hai **

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Originally posted by Tassneef:
** Jee Naayaab yeh mera hi Kalaam hai..!!

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) …MaiN na Faiz baNna chaahta hooN na Meer na Ghalib na Inshaa..maiN apni Pehchaan aap banNa chaahta hooN , magar Faiz, Meer Ghalib-o-Inshaa Jaissaaa ..kiouNkeh wo jo haiN wo apne apne Aaakash ke Sitaare haiN aur meri Manzil Suriyaa Sitaare se bhi kahiN aagey haiN…Baaqi uss Sitaare tak pohnchane ke lyie mere liye aik i Raastaa hai jiski kHaak Ghalib, Meer, Inshaa aur Faiz sahibaan jaise Shoaraa ke QadmoN se Munawar hui..maiN unki Roshneee meiN aage barhnaa chaahta hooN kiouNkeh DR Mohammad Illaama Iqbaal farmaate haiN:-

**Tu ShaaheeN hai,hai parwaaz kaam teraa
Tere Saamne AasmaaN aur bhi haiN **

Iss lyie jab tak maiN zindaa hooN mazeed se mazeed ki talaash meiN KoshaaN rahouNgaa

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aap duaaoN mein yaad rakhiye gaa

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inshallah aapko aik Din iss Dost per FakHaar zaroor hogaa

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Hmmm bohot ho acha khuwaab hai aap ka…Aur humhe umeed hai keh jis tarha aap keh rehe hai ..aur aap ko apneh khuwaab par itna yakheen hai…To aap ka yeh khuwaab yakheen main badleh gha aik din…Inshallah
Lekin pher is dost ko bhool mat jahiyeh gha…okay…yaad rakhye gha humhe
Hum to aap keh liye humhesha duwa karhay ghay keh aap jo bhi apni zindagii main chahtay hai woh purah ho jahay ..Ameen

NahiN Nayaab yeh kHwaab nahiN…Yeh meri Manzil ka Nishaan hai..soch hai meri …

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aur Hayaat hai meri

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Baaqi DostoN ko koN bhool sakta haii..aap koi bhulne waali shakHsiyat nahiN hai balkeh aap to saath chalne waali shakHsiyaat haiN

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aap ko bhulaiya nahIn ja saktaa

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keep smiling


**Ham Ehl-e-Qafas tanhaa bhi nahiN har roz Naseem-e-Subah-e-Watan
YaadoN se Mo`attar aati hai AshkoN se Munawwar jaati hai **

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NahiN Nayaab yeh kHwaab nahiN…Yeh meri Manzil ka Nishaan hai..soch hai meri …

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aur Hayaat hai meri

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Baaqi DostoN ko koN bhool sakta haii..aap koi bhulne waali shakHsiyat nahiN hai balkeh aap to saath chalne waali shakHsiyaat haiN

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aap ko bhulaiya nahIn ja saktaa

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keep smiling

Aghar yeh aap ki manzil hai to hum duwa karhe ghay keh aap apni manzil main kamiyaab ho(Ameen)

Ameen (sum-ameen) aur aap bhi apne maqsid meiN kaamiyaab hoN (ameen)

**Barhti rahe kHudaa ki Mohabbat kHudaa kare
haasil ho tum ko deed ki Lazzat kHudaa kare

Tauheed ki ho Lab pe Shahaadat kHudaa kare
Imaan ki ho Dil meiN hilaawat kHudaa kare

Parh jaye aisi Naiki ki Aadat kHuda kare
Sar-zad na ho koi bhi Shraarat kHudaa kare

Haakim rahe DiloN pey Shariyat kHuda kare
Haasil ho Mustafaa (saw) ki rafaaqat kHudaa kare

Tal jaye jo bhi aaye Museebat kHudaa kare
Pohnche na tumko koi Aziyat khudaa kare

Manzoor ho tumhaari ataa'at khudaa kare
Maqbool ho tumhaari Ibaadat khuda kare

Mil jayee tumko Deen ki Daulat kHudaa kare
Chamke Falak pe Taara-e-Qismat khudaa kare

cHooTey kabhi na Jaam-e-SakHaawat kHudaa kare
TooTey kabhi na Paay-e-Sadaaqat kHudaa kare**
(ameen)


*Ham Ehl-e-Qafas tanhaa bhi nahiN har roz Naseem-e-Subah-e-Watan
YaadoN se Mo`attar aati hai AshkoN se Munawwar jaati hai *

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Originally posted by Tassneef:
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Ameen (sum-ameen) aur aap bhi apne maqsid meiN kaamiyaab hoN (ameen)

**Barhti rahe kHudaa ki Mohabbat kHudaa kare
haasil ho tum ko deed ki Lazzat kHudaa kare

Tauheed ki ho Lab pe Shahaadat kHudaa kare
Imaan ki ho Dil meiN hilaawat kHudaa kare

Parh jaye aisi Naiki ki Aadat kHuda kare
Sar-zad na ho koi bhi Shraarat kHudaa kare

Haakim rahe DiloN pey Shariyat kHuda kare
Haasil ho Mustafaa (saw) ki rafaaqat kHudaa kare

Tal jaye jo bhi aaye Museebat kHudaa kare
Pohnche na tumko koi Aziyat khudaa kare

Manzoor ho tumhaari ataa’at khudaa kare
Maqbool ho tumhaari Ibaadat khuda kare

Mil jayee tumko Deen ki Daulat kHudaa kare
Chamke Falak pe Taara-e-Qismat khudaa kare

cHooTey kabhi na Jaam-e-SakHaawat kHudaa kare
TooTey kabhi na Paay-e-Sadaaqat kHudaa kare**
(ameen)

Tassneef jee..bohot khoob

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bohot khoooob zabardast.!!!

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