Ahsas ka Chhatt,naar shajar jalne laga hai
Aa ja k mere dil ka nagar jalne laga hai…
Ban bass pe majboor kia Aahl-e-jahan ne
Dum tor,ti Asha,oon ka ghar jalne laga hai
Hai mere muqadar main faqat Aatish-e-furqat
Dastak di jahan main ne,woh daarr jalne laga hai
Ja,rii hai mah-o-saal se ye khel yun,he"Aaina"
Dil ki jo bujhi Aag,Jigar jalne laga hai…
Re: DarD...........
Ahsas ka Chhatt,naar shajar jalne laga hai
Aa ja k mere dil ka nagar jalne laga hai.....
Ban bass pe majboor kia Aahl-e-jahan ne
Dum tor,ti Asha,oon ka ghar jalne laga hai
Hai mere muqadar main faqat Aatish-e-furqat
Dastak di jahan main ne,woh daarr jalne laga hai
Ja,rii hai mah-o-saal se ye khel yun,he"Aaina"
Dil ki jo bujhi Aag,Jigar jalne laga hai..............
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dard ki shidat kia khenay.............bohat acha likhti ho.
welldone.
** shan**
Re: DarD...........
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Ahsas ka Chhatt,naar shajar jalne laga hai
Aa ja k mere dil ka nagar jalne laga hai.....
Ban bass pe majboor kia Aahl-e-jahan ne
Dum tor,ti Asha,oon ka ghar jalne laga hai
Hai mere muqadar main faqat Aatish-e-furqat
Dastak di jahan main ne,woh daarr jalne laga hai
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dard ki shidat kia khenay.............bohat acha likhti ho.
welldone.
** shan**
Re: DarD...........
Ahsas ka Chhatt,naar shajar jalne laga hai
Aa ja k mere dil ka nagar jalne laga hai.....
Ban bass pe majboor kia Aahl-e-jahan ne
Dum tor,ti Asha,oon ka ghar jalne laga hai
Hai mere muqadar main faqat Aatish-e-furqat
Dastak di jahan main ne,woh daarr jalne laga hai
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Bohat Ache Aaina Jee...!
Teeno she'r qayaamat k hain....
Or teesre ne to tarrpa k rakh dia.....
Aap chha gaee hain...Well Done...
AND
Thanx Alottttt For Sharing....
Khush Rahiye....
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Or agar ijaazat ho to isi zameen mein, main bhi ek ghazal likh loon...???
Re: DarD...........
Thankx Shan n Zamil.................Ary Zamil Aasman par ghazal likhany waloon ko aj zameen par ghazal likhnay ki kya zarorat par gai???phir bhi ager ap itni mohabat se ijazaat mang rahy hein to hum kesay inkar karin bilkul ijazaat hai..................................................Aaina
Re: DarD...........
Very nice Aaina :-)
Re: DarD...........
Buhat khoob Aiyna ji,,,
Re: DarD…
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