Dard Phail Jaiy ga..........ma New nazam...!!!

[SJ]

Re: Dard Phail Jaiy ga…ma New nazam…!!!

@redidentity

Sonia.. poem is sweet.. but.. i feel k it is not among the best of urs.. there are few laggings..

magar.. feeling is there..

aaww…thanks…
u r rite…jaldi mein likhee thee…soocha share kar lon…
thanks alot for encouragement!!!