ehsan
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dard kee hud se guzaranaa to abhi baaqi hai
Toot kar mera bikharna toh abhi baaqi hai
paas aake meraa dukh-dard bantane waley
mujhsey kataraa ke guzaranaa to abhi baaqi hai
chund sheron mein kahaan Dhalati hai ehasas kee aag
Ghum kaa ye rang nikharana to abhi baaqi hai
rang-e-rusvaai sahi shahar kee dewaaron par
naam “Rashid” kaa ubharanaa to abhi baaqi hai
AQ
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Re: Dard kee hud se guzaranaa to abhi baaqi hai
Noon Meem Rashid?
This is the heart of the whole poem, in my opinion:
Chund sheroN maiN kahaaN Dhalti hai ehsaas kee aag
Gha'm kaaa yeh ra'Ng nikharnaa tau abhi baaaaqi hai
ehsan
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Re: Dard kee hud se guzaranaa to abhi baaqi hai
^ Rashid Kamal
ehsan
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One of his other ashaar I like:
yaa unheN bhi meri tarah junuN toh phir un mein umjh mein ye farq kyaa
mein giraft-e-Gam se na bach sakaa woh huduud-e-Gam se nikal gaye
AQ
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One of his other ashaar I like:
yaa unheN bhi meri tarah junuN toh phir un mein umjh mein ye farq kyaa
mein giraft-e-Gam se na bach sakaa woh huduud-e-Gam se nikal gaye
deep..
so Rashid Kamal... I think this is the first time I read something of him...
The name reminds me of my teacher Hassan Akber Kamal :D
his one simple sher:
Kamal maiN ussay kiss dil say bewafa keh dooN?
Woh bewafa tau naheeN, bewafaa'oN jaisa hay
Re: Dard kee hud se guzaranaa to abhi baaqi hai
Dard ki koi Haad or ishQ ki koi intheha nahi hotee :)
Re: Dard kee hud se guzaranaa to abhi baaqi hai
very nice1 :k:
Re: Dard kee hud se guzaranaa to abhi baaqi hai
very nice
NaMaan
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Zabardast ... and very deep ... :biggthumb
S.786
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best one
Re: Dard kee hud se guzaranaa to abhi baaqi hai
Oy hoay hoay loot liya zalim:lajawab:
PS: Could any pne please translate in English
Daanie
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nice sharing :)
Koyal
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Beautiful Sharing ehsan g :)
Re: Dard kee hud se guzaranaa to abhi baaqi hai
Bohat khoob..
Re: Dard kee hud se guzaranaa to abhi baaqi hai
very nice.
abeeha
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first too verses r really very good.:)