Dard Jub Tairee Atta Hai Tu Gilla Kis Say Kaarain...!!!

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

muddii February 2, 2008, 5:13am 1

Dard Jub Tairee Atta Hai Tu Gilla Kis Say Kaarain
Hijr Jub Tu Nay Diya Hai Tu Gilla Kis Say Kaarain

Aks Bhikhra Hai Taira Toot Kaay Aaeenay Main
Ho Gaiee Num Nazar, Aks Liya Kis Say Kaarain

Main Safar Main Hun Mairay Saath Judaii Tairee
Humsafar Gham Hai Tu Phir Taira Pata Kis Say Kaarain

Khil Uthay Gul Ya Khilee Dhasht-e-Hina Tairee
Her Taraf Tu Hai Tu Phir Pata Kis Say Kaarain

Tairay Lub, Tairee Nigahaain, Tairay Aariz, Tairee Zulf
Itnay Zindaan Hain Tu Iss Dil Ko Raha Kis Say Kaarain

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fara February 2, 2008, 11:02am 2

Re: Dard Jub Tairee Atta Hai Tu Gilla Kis Say Kaarain...!!!

Tairay Lub, Tairee Nigahaain, Tairay Aariz, Tairee Zulf
Itnay Zindaan Hain Tu Iss Dil Ko Raha Kis Say Kaarain

zabardast!

deadsoul February 2, 2008, 11:49am 3

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v nice

Ali_2 February 2, 2008, 12:17pm 4

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buhat khoob

dosti_dosti90 February 2, 2008, 12:22pm 5

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zabardast

muddii February 4, 2008, 4:03am 6

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Thank u for liking fara:)

muddii February 4, 2008, 4:04am 7

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Thank u:)

muddii February 4, 2008, 4:04am 8

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Thank u Ali:)

muddii February 4, 2008, 4:05am 9

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Thank u:)

Dushwari February 4, 2008, 4:33am 10

Re: Dard Jub Tairee Atta Hai Tu Gilla Kis Say Kaarain...!!!

nice nazm, Muddi.

nic sheire.Main Safar Main Hun Mairay Saath Judaii Tairee
Humsafar Gham Hai Tu Phir Taira Pata Kis Say Kaarain

inspired this:
tu nahi heye aaj paas tow bhee heye tu saath saath
kitnee deir kee heye baad kee baat, kis seye kahein

best,
Dushwari

muddii February 4, 2008, 4:56am 11

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tu nahi heye aaj paas tow bhee heye tu saath saath
kitnee deir kee heye baad kee baat, kis seye kahein

Zabardast Choice Dushwari:)

Dushwari February 4, 2008, 4:57am 12

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yeye meira heye sheire. chacha jee. :> but thanks.
best,
Dushwari

Aryaan February 4, 2008, 8:06am 13

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Bohat khoob Muddii...

muddii February 4, 2008, 10:10am 14

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Hmmmmm thats nice:)

muddii February 4, 2008, 10:11am 15

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Thank u Aryaan:)