muddii
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Dard jub terii ataa hai to gilaa kis se kare.n
Hijr jab tuune diyaa hai to gilaa kis se kare.n
Aqs bikharaa hai teraa TuuT ke aa_iine me.n
Ho gayii num nazar aqs liyaa kis se kare.n
Mai.n safar me.n huu.N mere saath judaa_ii terii
Ham-safar Gam hai to phir teraa pataa kis se kare.n
Khil uThe gul yaa khile dast-e-hinaa_ii tere
Har taraf tuu hai to phir teraa pataa kis se kare.n
Tere lab, terii nigaahe.n tere aariz terii zulf
Itane zi.ndaa.N hai.n to is dil ko rihaa kis ke kare.n…
Re: Dard jab terii ataa hai to gilaa kis se kare.n
Wow very nice!
Aqls
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Re: Dard jab terii ataa hai to gilaa kis se kare.n
nice
SJ
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Re: Dard jab terii ataa hai to gilaa kis se kare.n
Bohat Khoob!!!!:)
muddii
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Re: Dard jab terii ataa hai to gilaa kis se kare.n
Wow very nice!
Thank u for liking:)
muddii
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Re: Dard jab terii ataa hai to gilaa kis se kare.n
nice
Thank u for liking..........:)
Hmmmmm purr yeh aqal-less key samajh nahee aiee, if you can appreciate such a delicate poem.............then Hmmmmm
muddii
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Re: Dard jab terii ataa hai to gilaa kis se kare.n
Bohat Khoob!!!!:)
Thank you for liking:)
ehsan
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Re: Dard jab terii ataa hai to gilaa kis se kare.n
Bauhat Khoob
muddii
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Re: Dard jab terii ataa hai to gilaa kis se kare.n
Bauhat Khoob
Thank u:)
babri
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Re: Dard jab terii ataa hai to gilaa kis se kare.n
one of my favr very nice.
muddii
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Re: Dard jab terii ataa hai to gilaa kis se kare.n
one of my favr very nice.
Thank you:)
Re: Dard jab terii ataa hai to gilaa kis se kare.n
:k:
muddii
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Re: Dard jab terii ataa hai to gilaa kis se kare.n
Thank u Prince:)
babri
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Re: Dard jab terii ataa hai to gilaa kis se kare.n
oye great pa jii. chah gaaye ooooooooooo. very nice