dard dil se judaa nahiiN hotaa...merii ek chhoTii bahr kii Ghazal

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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**salaam/aadaab/tasleemaat

maiN aaj pahli baar aapkii is Haseen maHfil-e-she’r o suKhan meN apnii ek adnaa sii kaavish pesh karne kii jasaarat kar rahaa huuN is ummeed e qawii ke saath k aapkii tab’a e naazuk par baar e giraaN na guzregii. aapkii tanqees o tanqeed aur Hausalah-afzaaii kaa shiddat se intizaar rahegaa.

shukria

faqat Khaak_nasheeN,
_______Hashmat**
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dard dil se judaa nahiiN hotaa
koii yuN baa_vafaa nahiiN hotaa

baat koii to hai kudoorat kii
ranj be_muddu’aa nahiiN hotaa

yuN mile ho Ghuroor o naKhwat se
jaise dil meN Khudaa nahiiN hotaa

tumbhii naaseH kahiiN lagaao dil
rog jii kaa buraa nahiiN hotaa

mashwara dil kaa maan lete haiN
phir bhii dil kaa kahaa nahiiN hotaa

pyaar “Sahbaa” se hai k zauq e nazar
aaj tak faisla nahiiN hotaa**

muntazir e aaraa :slight_smile:

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Re: dard dil se judaa nahiiN hotaa...merii ek chhoTii bahr kii Ghazal

sher no 3 is fantastic, gud work.

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Re: dard dil se judaa nahiiN hotaa...merii ek chhoTii bahr kii Ghazal

thank you so much Shazia. i liked that one too. :)
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Re: dard dil se judaa nahiiN hotaa...merii ek chhoTii bahr kii Ghazal

Nice work mate. Keep it up. Cares :)

Timepass-December 2013
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Re: dard dil se judaa nahiiN hotaa...merii ek chhoTii bahr kii Ghazal

very nice , buhut omda rwani hay jnab

lekin last sher mn kiya ,, Sahbaa ,, aapka takhllus hay???
kion k mujhy thuraa prhny mn alag sa laga ..
keep it up jnab

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Re: dard dil se judaa nahiiN hotaa...merii ek chhoTii bahr kii Ghazal

keep it up
i like the 3rd sher

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Re: dard dil se judaa nahiiN hotaa...merii ek chhoTii bahr kii Ghazal

i liked that

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Re: dard dil se judaa nahiiN hotaa...merii ek chhoTii bahr kii Ghazal

I liked the 5th shair... nice work!

The Hi/Bye Thread
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Re: dard dil se judaa nahiiN hotaa...merii ek chhoTii bahr kii Ghazal

AMAZING!!

Timepass-December 2013
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shukria sad hazaar gulistaan :)
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Usne
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**
pasandeedgii ke liye beHad mamnoon o mutashakkir huN

ji, "Sahbaa" meraa taKhallus hai. ab aise taKhallus kam kam hii sho'araa musta'mil karte haiN. thank you**
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Usne
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shukria. mujeh bhi teesaa pasand aayaa nisbatan. thank you :)
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lonely ji shukria. thanks for liking ma Ghazal. :)
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Fara Ji aapkii Hausalah-afzaaii sar aaNkhoN par. she'r 5 pasand karne ke liye mamnoon u shukr_guzaar huN :)**
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shukria ji bahooot bahooooot aapkaa Bela Ji :)
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Usne
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Re: dard dil se judaa nahiiN hotaa...merii ek chhoTii bahr kii Ghazal

simply cool ..... Ghazal Goui mujhay hamaisha say aik mushkil fan lagata hay leekan aap nay kamal kar dia .... buhat buhat mubarkbaad wasool kigiye ga .....

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Re: dard dil se judaa nahiiN hotaa...merii ek chhoTii bahr kii Ghazal

Baat tu koi hai KaDuraat ki
Ranj be_muddu'aa nahi hota

Bohat kohab !

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Re: dard dil se judaa nahiiN hotaa...merii ek chhoTii bahr kii Ghazal

khoob hai

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Re: dard dil se judaa nahiiN hotaa…merii ek chhoTii bahr kii Ghazal

:lajawab:

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Re: dard dil se judaa nahiiN hotaa...merii ek chhoTii bahr kii Ghazal

zabardust poetry g .....