Dar tu dard hai

Dilsay · September 11, 2004, 9:48am

Dar tu dard hai tham jaya ga kisi rooz
Yad tu yad hai mit jaya gee kisi rooz
Tum say milna mari khawaish he rahee
Tari khawaish main mara behi naam aya ga kis rooz
Aab tu chooro ya galay shkway
Bas karoo piyar ka wada kisi rooz
Piyar tu piyar hai hoo jaya ga kisi rooz
Janta hoon main tu loot aya ga kis rooz

by: Dilsay

Pyara_sa_doost · September 11, 2004, 10:59am

aye haye wow dilsay gr8 stuff

achi se sheer sweet se alfaz aye haye
dilsay ne jo likah bohat hi kohb he aye haye
:)

keep sharing dost

tata:)

HeArT_HaCKeR · September 11, 2004, 11:08am

Boht khoob dilsay bhaii

keep sharin

Dilsay · September 11, 2004, 7:58pm

Pyara sa doost
Dear thanks alot aur pasand karnay ka shukriya.

HeArT HaCKeR
Pasand karnay ka bohat shukriya Bahan jee

ghazal_kisi_ke · September 12, 2004, 4:30am

veryyy nice dilsay .. :k: ..

show_sha · September 12, 2004, 10:12am

Aab tu chooro ya galay shkway
Bas karoo piyar ka wada kisi rooz
Piyar tu piyar hai hoo jaya ga kisi rooz
Janta hoon main tu loot aya ga kis rooz

dilsay!
bahut accha........

Dilsay · September 12, 2004, 12:33pm

ghazal kisi ke
Thanks alot and is nice to see your comments on my writing

show_sha

Thanks alot

Bas usi kisi rooz ka intazar hai

koiDost · September 12, 2004, 9:00pm

Bahut Khoob Janab DilSay :)

_Janu_Jia · September 16, 2004, 4:26am

Re: Dar tu dard hai

bunday tu jaan lega kisi din

Dilsay · September 16, 2004, 5:51pm

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*Originally posted by koiDost: *
Bahut Khoob Janab DilSay :)
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Thanks alot Dear

Dilsay · September 16, 2004, 5:52pm

Re: Re: Dar tu dard hai

Hum apnay hisay ke zindagi jee lain bohat hai.. kisi ke jaan kiya lain gay hum…

system · October 9, 2004, 7:51pm

Thanks for sharing and keep posting.:k: