Daagh daaman ke jo dho laitay to achhaa hotaa

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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**Daagh daaman ke jo dho laitay to achhaa hotaa
Hum bhi ji bharr ke jo ro laitay to achhaa hotaa

Aisaa toofaa’n to zindagi mai’n phir na aanay lagaa
Khud hee kashti ko duboo laitay to achha hotaa

Raat k uss peher jo woh diyaa buhjaat k chalay
unn ko aankho’n mai’n samo laitay to achha hotaa

Hum sawaalo’n ko nigaaho’n mai’n chhupaa rakhtay hai’n
Jhaank aankho’n mai’n kabho laitay to achha hotaa

Un k deedaar ki ik raah to baaqi thi kabhi
Garr jo ik shabb ko hee so laitay to achha hotaa

Un ke phoolo’n mai’n wo khushboo to abb nahi baaqi
Un ke kaantay hee chubho laitay to achha hotaa

Hum se manzil ka ta’ayyun na ho sakaa Sajid
Khud ko rasto’n mai’n jo kho laitay to achha hotaa**

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Re: Daagh daaman ke jo dho laitay to achhaa hotaa

sad sad poetry :crying:

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Re: Daagh daaman ke jo dho laitay to achhaa hotaa

achchhii Ghazal hai magar chand misr'e Khaarij ul bahr haiN aur kuchh meN alfaaz kii be-tarteebii hai. tasHeeH kar lijiiyegaa...shukria share karne ke liye :)

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Re: Daagh daaman ke jo dho laitay to achhaa hotaa

**Un k deedaar ki ik raah to baaqi thi kabhi
Garr jo ik shabb ko hee so laitay to achha hotaa

Bilkul sahi socha.. Neend puri karna lazmi hai :)
**

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Re: Daagh daaman ke jo dho laitay to achhaa hotaa

:hmmm: ab iss pehle ke LP poochay, ye bataiye ke Behr kia hoti hai, aur kharij ul bahr se aap ki kia murad hai?

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Re: Daagh daaman ke jo dho laitay to achhaa hotaa

I know behr kya hota hai…Amal explained it to me some days back :balley:

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Re: Daagh daaman ke jo dho laitay to achhaa hotaa

Nice !!