daag duniya ne diye zakhm zamaane se mile

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

HallaGulla March 2, 2007, 6:48pm 1

daag duniyaa ne diye zakhm zamaane se mile

hum ko ye tohfe tumhen dost banaane se mile

*hum tarasate hi taraste hi tarasate hi rahe *

voh falaane se falaane se falaane se mile

*khud se mil jaate to chaahat kaa bharam rah jaataa *

kyaa mile aap jo logon ke milaane se mile

*kaise maane ke unhen bhool gayaa too ai ‘Kaif’ *

unke khat aaj hamen tere sarhaane se mile

~~~~~~~~
Kaif Bhopali
~~~~~~~~

Shikra March 2, 2007, 7:51pm 2

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Good choice :k:

me hyper or daft people?

me hyper or daft people?

me hyper or daft people?

aabla_pa March 3, 2007, 9:11am 3

Re: daag duniya ne diye zakhm zamaane se mile

gr8. :k:

me hyper or daft people?

aatir March 3, 2007, 9:21am 4

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nice

moonmine March 3, 2007, 1:47pm 5

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gr8! very nice..:)

Asma_Farhan March 3, 2007, 1:55pm 6

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Bohat khoob!

Amal March 3, 2007, 2:42pm 7

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HallaGulla:

daag duniyaa ne diye zakhm zamaane se mile

hum ko ye tohfe tumhen dost banaane se mile

hum tarasate hi taraste hi tarasate hi rahe

voh falaane se falaane se falaane se mile

khud se mil jaate to chaahat kaa bharam rah jaataa

kyaa mile aap jo logon ke milaane se mile

kaise maane ke unhen bhool gayaa too ai ‘Kaif’

unke khat aaj hamen tere sarhaane se mile
Kaif Bhopali
~~~~****~~~~

Lovely ghazal Hallagulla :k:

hiba_no.1 March 3, 2007, 3:17pm 8

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v nice

HallaGulla March 3, 2007, 3:46pm 9

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Thanks a lot to all of you.

Prince_Ali March 3, 2007, 4:30pm 10

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:k:

Gondal_007 March 4, 2007, 10:08am 11

Re: daag duniya ne diye zakhm zamaane se mile

Nice HallaGulla