Re: Create a story ..
Haha…
CH.B, I was trying to save MC of your story, keep him alive. Scene # 4 made no sense, TBH. I would have elminited it altogether as a certified short film producer but instead I let the MC speak himself that he did not want to be killed or injured as the only thing which was clear to me in 4th scene was, “…where he was sleeping. He came closer and said”… I desperately hoped that that was MC speaking and he still was not dead. Hence that dialogue from him in scene #5](http://gupshup.org/gs/usertag.php?do=list&action=hash&hash=5) .
I have not yet read the updated scenes but incase your MC is already dead then today Im gonna eat biryaaaaani to celebrate… I mean mourn his death 