Couple Of Ash'aaR

1:
kya kahein laee hai kaanto’n ki adaawat kya rang
ab tabeeat hai k phoolon se bhi ghabraati hai

**2:
**zindagi tu ne dikhaaey hein mujay itnay bhanwar
ab to thehray huay paani se bhi dar lagta hai

Re: Couple Of Ash'aaR

bohat khoob :)

Re: Couple Of Ash'aaR

ablaa pa,

great poetry.

adding here some: for 'hai' ka kafiya

larzish jeb tek dum na toreye, nahee
teb tek seire (cotent, satiated) hoti heye
khood jalaee howee chingari (flame)
uss keye serd wajood ko paa ker
iss meye hee phir rakh hoti heye
rukh bedl jata heye, perchaee ka bhi
kee gaee setchi wohh herr dua
jeb kabool hoti heye

dushwari

Re: Couple Of Ash’aaR

nice :k:

Re: Couple Of Ash'aaR

bahot achhe!

Re: Couple Of Ash'aaR

ThankU DushwaRi. And everyone else, ofcourse :)