cooool

rabia_rana · August 16, 2006, 12:00pm

naam apna bhi na raha hoga
wo shajr jer say jab gira hoga

hum bhi apni jaga sahi thay bahut
wo bhi ghalti pay na raha hoga

tum meray saath ik qdam tu chalo
phir hr rasta hara bhara hoga

mai bhi dunia mai hon majboor bahut
tu bhi tanha kahin jiya hoga

wo munafiq tha kuch na khta tha
ab akilay mai ro raha hoga

sri pabandian hain meray liye
wo tu azad phir raha hoga

mujh say milnay ka kia sabab hoga?
phir koi kam per gaya hoga

milnay apni gharaz say aye ho
dil ka mausam badal gaya hoga

dil ki veranian nahi jatin
ab bahar aye bhi tu kia hoga??

aaj darya mai tughyani hay bahut
teri ankhon say num gaya hoag

by RABIA RANA(HAYA SHAH)

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · August 16, 2006, 12:09pm

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Baqi sab tou theekh hay lekin iss mein cooool kya hay pehley yeh tou samjha do:~)

HeArT_HaCKeR · August 16, 2006, 2:38pm

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nice nice :k:

Muslim_girl_1 · August 16, 2006, 5:45pm

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nice one rabia g…:k:

maha_cutest · August 23, 2006, 6:50am

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bari khushi hoi daikh kar kah gupshup forum par buhat saray achay poet hain ..... buhat acha likha aap nay rabia ....

rabia_rana · August 23, 2006, 9:35am

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**Gul ji 1st of all thanx k app nay meri poetry itni concentration say perhi.........cool mai nay is liye likha q k meri in donon ghazals mai wo xtreme condition nahi hai jo k meri poetry mai hoti hai.................or meri poetry sab say pehlay meri frnd hi perhti hai us nay 1st time perh ker kaha "cool rabi" so mai naay issay cool likh dia.....:) **

Sannan · August 24, 2006, 3:02am

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aaj darya mai tughyani hay bahut
teri ankhon say num gaya hoga

Wah g wah ...Haya G aap to chah gaeen Hain kya khubsrat Alfaz Ka istaamal kia hay aap nay .... keep it up rabia

mujh say milnay ka kia sabab hoga?
phir koi kam per gaya hoga

yah she'r meray khayal main pahlay bhi aap nay kissi thread main send kia tha ??

rabia_rana · August 24, 2006, 7:32am

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hun e nazar hai apka.............
je han ye shair mai nay my new stuff mai send kia tha lakin us k kuch din bad ye puri ghazal ban gaye tu send krdi............

Sannan · August 24, 2006, 9:04am

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Good shot rabia .....

Zamil · August 25, 2006, 8:13pm

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*Excellent, these r aaawsum...:) *

fara · August 26, 2006, 7:53am

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**Rabia Ji.. Tamam ashar he achay hain her aakhir kay do ashar behtreen hain.
Buhat achi ghazal kahi aap nay... Dil ko chuti huwi.

Fara
**

rabia_rana · February 9, 2007, 9:20am

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thanx a lot fara dear

twin_born · February 9, 2007, 9:43am

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hiii rabiya rana ... is tht really ur own poetery ...

hmmmm thts nice ...

rabia_rana · February 9, 2007, 9:58am

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tmhay meri poetry per itna shak kiyun rehta hai twiny???**

twin_born · February 9, 2007, 10:31am

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Ayseee baat nahee haii ....par yeh poetery to really

Wah wah .........haiii

SJ · February 9, 2007, 10:34am

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simply awesome!

Mysterious_Woman · February 9, 2007, 10:49am

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gr8 stuff rabia!