Convinced

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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were we ever to know
are we meant to be
together
it’s not the conventional relationship as the world sees it,
or knows it
it’s something more precious
as we are separate for now

does this cross your mind,
at times,
that perhaps, lately,
you are lonely for me?
as i am lonely for you?
do you also miss me,
as i miss you too??

there is nothing to disappoint each other with…
fearlessly,

you and me
will suffice

don’t you see?

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yaa i am convinced …

Hii dushwaree:wave: how r u

Can u convince mee more … hahaaaa hmmm

I wana have chat soemtime with u …if u wish tooo
just chat … nothing to do with this thread
…

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Yeaah, aaa see whats goin on hear
This gentleman must be given an opportunity of chat…

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what exactly do you mean, lahore981?

since u cannot communicate on ur own, please give the rationale as to why YOU, of all the people, will make these indirect comments?

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i do not like to chat, saminzi.

& btw the manner in which u made the offer, was uncalled for, & as a self respecting GS member, i do not like this mode of appreciation of the poem by me, titled ‘convinced’.

best,

dushi

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Dushi dear..... Khushbash,

Congratulation for a well crafted and great poem, it seems you can express better in english, this doesnot mean that I have doubt about your urdu skills.
and as a mature writer, donot get distracted by xyz comments, you donot have to prove your self, you are good... we know...keep it up.. and smile.

darwesh !

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thanks, darwesh, for appreciating my poetry.

may Allah always make u to be truly understanding of honest feelings & not be playing mind games.

may u always be comforting to ur one and only lover who u plan to take on, as a comforting spouse.

kind regards,

Dushwari

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this poem is so pretty not to mention it seems so sincere and honest.

PS! duwesh...is that Irani?