Re: Contribute your poetic sense : = Poetic Image - PART II
Sundar Komal Sapnoun Key Barat Guzar Gaiee Jaana~n
Dhoop Ankhoun Tak Aa Puhanchii Hai Raat Guzar Gaiee Jaana~n
awesome sher muddi bhai but I am unable to relate the thoughts with the image... Can you kindly elaborate to me....
The vague co-relation I can make is that "dhoop kaa aanKhoN tukk pahunchnaa" is similar to "kashti kaa kinaaraY tukk pahunchna"???
Raha gardishon main har dum mere ishq ka sitara kabhi dagmagaaiyi kashti,kabhi kho gaya kinara :(
laikin yeh kashtiyaaN tau kinaaraY par hee haiN :p
misaal,e abr-e-zameen ka libaas hu jaaoun
ju yuon nahi** tu samandar ki piyas hu jaaon**
tamam din ki kari dhoop men ye sochta hon
men shab k pichhly peher ka hiraas hu jaon
(mohsin naqwi)
Awesome
Bheegii Shaam Key Sahil Par KaShtiyaan Chup Chup Rehtii hein jeisey Hijjr Kii Pehlii ChhOt Par Larkiyaan Chup Chup Rehtii hein
:D
yeh itnaY achaY ash'aar tum kahaaN saY laati ho :ASA: