Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

[Tahurra]

Re: Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

@ehsan

I think you should post the next one.

App log bhut expert hain shairi mein, jo mein dongi tu wo first attempt mein hosakta hy,phir bhi try leti hun

[Tahurra]

Re: Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

@hybridkamal

kis kis ko bataaeiN gai … kaa sabab hum
tu mujh sey khafaa hai tou … kay liye aa

Ruswai
Judaii

[hybridkamal]

Re: Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

@Tahurra

Ruswai
Judaii

close, but thoRaa aur ulat phair kareiN

[ehsan]

Re: Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

@hybridkamal

kis kis ko bataaeiN gai … kaa sabab hum
tu mujh sey khafaa hai tou … kay liye aa

Thats one of my favourite shairs:

Judai
zamanay

Ranjish hee sahi dil hee dukhanay kay liye aa
Aa phir say mujhey chor kay janay kay liye aa

[ehsan]

Re: Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

@Tahurra

App log bhut expert hain shairi mein, jo mein dongi tu wo first attempt mein hosakta hy,phir bhi try leti hun

try it, yehi toh game ka maza hai

[hybridkamal]

Re: Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

@ehsan

Thats one of my favourite shairs:

Judai
zamanay

Ranjish hee sahi dil hee dukhanay kay liye aa
Aa phir say mujhey chor kay janay kay liye aa

:k:

[Tahurra]

Re: Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

Kitna…hota hy shaam kay andheron mein
Poochu un…se jinkay ghar nahi hotay

Now from my side

[ehsan]

Re: Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

@Tahurra

Kitna…hota hy shaam kay andheron mein
Poochu un…se jinkay ghar nahi hotay

Now from my side

Is first misra word Khauf?

I think I have read this somewhere, trying to remember the next line.

[Tahurra]

Re: Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

@ehsan

Is first misra word Khauf?

I think I have read this somewhere, trying to remember the next line.

Ji correct,

[ehsan]

Re: Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

@Tahurra

Ji correct,

Is the next word Panchee

[Tahurra]

Re: Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

@ehsan

Is the next word Panchee

App close hain

[muqawwee123]

Re: Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

@Tahurra

App close hain

parindon?

[KKF]

Re: Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

i think you are right because:
**
kitnaa Khauf hotaa hai raat ke andheroN meN
poochho un -------- se jinke ghar nahiiN hote**

count the syllables:

kit + naa + Khau + f + ho + taa + hai + raa + t + ke + an + dhe + roN + meN = 14
poo + chho + un + ----- + se + jin + ke + ghar + na + hiiN + ho + te = 11

these two misr’as must be equal in weight but here they are obviously not…[14 vs 11 syllables]

now, 14 -11 = 3
so, the missing word must be 3 syllables long…

since parindoN = pa + rin + doN = 3 syllables

so, your word equals the desired number of syllables.

Q.E.D.

[muqawwee123]

Re: Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

@KKF

i think you are right because:
**
kitnaa Khauf hotaa hai raat ke andheroN meN
poochho un -------- se jinke ghar nahiiN hote**

count the syllables:

kit + naa + Khau + f + ho + taa + hai + raa + t + ke + an + dhe + roN + meN = 14
poo + chho + un + ----- + se + jin + ke + ghar + na + hiiN + ho + te = 11

these two misr’as must be equal in weight but here they are obviously not…[14 vs 11 syllables]

now, 14 -11 = 3
so, the missing word must be 3 syllables long…

since parindoN = pa + rin + doN = 3 syllables

so, your word equals the desired number of syllables.

Q.E.D.

Not all poets were students of Hazrat Zauq like you

[KKF]

Re: Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

@muqawwee123

Not all poets were students of Hazrat Zauq like you

lol…chaleN, dekhte haiN k asl soorat she’r kii kia hai?

[ehsan]

Re: Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

@KKF

i think you are right because:
**
kitnaa Khauf hotaa hai raat ke andheroN meN
poochho un -------- se jinke ghar nahiiN hote**

count the syllables:

kit + naa + Khau + f + ho + taa + hai + raa + t + ke + an + dhe + roN + meN = 14
poo + chho + un + ----- + se + jin + ke + ghar + na + hiiN + ho + te = 11

these two misr’as must be equal in weight but here they are obviously not…[14 vs 11 syllables]

now, 14 -11 = 3
so, the missing word must be 3 syllables long…

since parindoN = pa + rin + doN = 3 syllables

so, your word equals the desired number of syllables.

Q.E.D.

[Tahurra]

Re: Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

@muqawwee123

parindon?

Yes. Right
Kitna khof hota hy shaam kay andheron mein
Poochu un parindon se jinkay ghar nahi hotay

[muqawwee123]

Re: Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

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yaar-o-aghayaar ke haathon mein ______ thi ‘Faraz’
aur sab dekh rahe the ke _________ tu tha

[muqawwee123]

Re: Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

Next:

yaar-o-aghayaar ke haathon mein ______ thi ‘Faraz’
aur sab dekh rahe the ke _________ tu tha

[ehsan]

Re: Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

Pehla misra teer/ talwar