Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

KKF · December 11, 2014, 4:14pm

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yahaN math meN sabhii kamzor haiN! :D

ehsan · December 11, 2014, 4:15pm

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Three letters in urdu or english

muqawwee123 · December 11, 2014, 4:16pm

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Urdu ka shair hai to Urdu ke 3 letters

ehsan · December 11, 2014, 4:18pm

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wafa

muqawwee123 · December 11, 2014, 4:20pm

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correct :k: what about next word in second misra?

ehsan · December 11, 2014, 4:21pm

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Soch raha hoon you said close to saadagi.

KKF · December 11, 2014, 4:22pm

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Mujhse tu poochne aaya hai vafaa ke maane
Ye teri sada dili maar na daale mujhko

muqawwee123 · December 11, 2014, 4:29pm

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correct.

ab aap ki bari. lekin koi bojhne laiq shair hona chahiye.. ye nahin ke Bahadur Shah Zafar ke gumshuda deewan se selection kar laen

KKF · December 11, 2014, 4:39pm

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thank God i got it right! :)

meri taraf se ek Ghair jinnaatii she'r:
**
baiThe tumhaare dar pe to ------- talak na kii
aise ----- k saaya-e-deevaar ho gaye!**

ehsan · December 11, 2014, 4:42pm

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Talak as in divorce?

KKF · December 11, 2014, 4:44pm

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no...vo to talaaq hotaa hai...yeh hai 'talak' = tak [even]

Tahurra · December 11, 2014, 5:13pm

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Guftugu
& khamosh

KKF · December 11, 2014, 5:16pm

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pahlaa waalaa to munaasib lagtaa hai magar yeh jawaab durust nahiiN...duusra lafz "Khaamosh" fiT nahiiN hotaa is ke liye 'Khamosh huye" honaa zaroorii hai. chuN k sirf ek lafz darkaar hai is liye Khaamosh saHeeH nahiiN hai.

kuchh aur sochiye! :)

hybridkamal · December 11, 2014, 5:32pm

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yeh shair main nay Parha huaa hua hai, i think hairat Allahbadi kaa hai

baiThe tumhaare dar pe to jumbish talak na kii
aise jamay k saaya-e-deevaar ho gaye

KKF · December 11, 2014, 5:34pm

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waah waah waah...aapkii yaad daasht kii daad denii paRegii...bilkul saHeeH farmaayaa...

...ab aapkii baarii aayii. maiN dil thaam ke baiThtaa huN! :)

ehsan · December 11, 2014, 5:45pm

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:k:

I would never have got it.

hybridkamal · December 11, 2014, 5:47pm

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your approach is more vast than others…

Tahurra · December 11, 2014, 5:49pm

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This^

ehsan · December 11, 2014, 5:51pm

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I think you should post the next one.

hybridkamal · December 11, 2014, 5:52pm

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kis kis ko bataaeiN gai .......... kaa sabab hum
tu mujh sey khafaa hai tou .......... kay liye aa