Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

Aceones · January 4, 2015, 9:47am

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i know! i know!
can i tell straight away?

by the way yehi sher mukhtalif tarteeb main bhi suna hay.
i will write the other variation with the same words missing

woh log tumnay aik hee shokhi main _______ diye
paida kiya _____ nay jinhain khaaq chaan kar

P_G · January 4, 2015, 5:31pm

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Muqawee > nahi ... . . . . . . . . . . .Aceones > han ap ki tartib thek hai . . .ap jawab day kar jeet jain

Aceones · January 4, 2015, 5:57pm

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ooook

woh log tumnay aik hee shokhi main kho diye
paida kiya falak nay jinhain khaak chhaan kar

ehsan · January 4, 2015, 6:03pm

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Your turn

Aceones · January 4, 2015, 6:05pm

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__________ hi na barpa huwa, warna hum bhi
__________ hi sahi, naachtay gaatay jaatay

P_G · January 5, 2015, 3:25am

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1>mehshar ?

2> larkharatay ?

Aceones · January 5, 2015, 5:15am

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^ you are on right direction

pehlay misray main murakkab lafz hay

edit: jo kefiyat yahan doosray misray main hay, uska nateeja larkharana ho sakta hay

Howzat_1 · January 5, 2015, 6:53am

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Dosra Misra Girtay Partay ? Or

Aceones · January 5, 2015, 7:13am

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edit: actually u r close.

girtay partay us situation ka result hay jo yahan ayegi

Aceones · January 5, 2015, 7:17am

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doosray misray main bhi compound word hay

Howzat_1 · January 5, 2015, 7:21am

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Dagamagatay Qadm ya TangaiN

Aceones · January 5, 2015, 7:28am

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na, pair bandhay huway hain

Howzat_1 · January 5, 2015, 7:33am

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zanjeer pa

Aceones · January 5, 2015, 7:46am

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bohot nazdeek

zanjeer kay liye doosra lafz, aur isay farsi tarkeeb main sochain

Howzat_1 · January 5, 2015, 7:51am

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Woh Faiz Key Ghazal Thi Aaj Bazar MaiN Pa BajolaN Chalo Kaheen Wohi To Naheen ?

Aceones · January 5, 2015, 7:55am

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wohi

pa-ba-joolan

پا بہ جولاں

Howzat_1 · January 5, 2015, 8:02am

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maiN Nay Yeh Sher Aisay Suna Tha

Woh log hum ne ek hi shokhi mein kho diye
Dhoonda Tha AasmaN ne JinhaiN khaak chaan kar

Oper Walla Sher bhi Parha hay Leekin Hum Ka Lafz Ziyada use howa hay

Howzat_1 · January 5, 2015, 8:04am

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Kuch Ziyada he Mushkil Tha, Pahla Misra Bhi Aisa He Hay kia Farsi Ka ?

_______ hi na barpa huwa, warna hum bhi
pa bajoolaN hi sahi, naachtay gaatay jaatay

Aceones · January 5, 2015, 8:21am

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wohi

pa-ba-joolan

پا بہ جولاں

Aceones · January 5, 2015, 8:23am

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pehlay bhi murakkab lafz hay, magar pa-ba-joolan jesa mushkil nahi hay

aaj kal news main is say milta julta kafi "in" hay