Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

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Re: Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

@Aceones

thats correct, mukammal ghazal hay

suno ye fakhr say ik raz bhi hum faash kartay hain
kabhi hum monh bhi dhotay thay, magar ab wash kartay hain

tha bachon kay liye bosa magar ab kiss hi kartay hain
satati theen kabhi yadain magar ab miss hi kartay hain

kabhi jo ammi abbu thay wohi ab mama papa hain
duaain jo kabhi detay thay wo buDhay ab syapa hain

kabhi naraaz hotay thay, magar ab mind kartay hain
jo masla kuch ulajh jaaye, solution find kartay hain

chehel qadmi kabhi kartay thay aur ab walk kartay hain
kabhi kartay thay hum batain magar ab talk kartay hain

Very nice ghazal
Deserves a thread of its own