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aap kis ke baare mian ziada pur umeed hain? 
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khuda aur moazziz
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Khuda is correct.
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ok here is next:
chehel qadmi kabhi kartay thay aur ab _____ kartay hain
kabhi kartay thay hum baatain magar ab _____ kartay hain
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1) aaram
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1) aaram
no
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ok here is next: chehel qadmi kabhi kartay thay aur ab _____ kartay hain kabhi kartay thay hum baatain magar ab _____ kartay hain
I once read a version of this shair on facebook, dont know whether it is right or there is another version.
- Walk
- talk
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I once read a version of this shair on facebook, dont know whether it is right or there is another version.
- Walk
- talk
sounds correct.
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I once read a version of this shair on facebook, dont know whether it is right or there is another version.
- Walk
- talk
thats correct, mukammal ghazal hay
suno ye fakhr say ik raz bhi hum faash kartay hain
kabhi hum monh bhi dhotay thay, magar ab wash kartay hain
tha bachon kay liye bosa magar ab kiss hi kartay hain
satati theen kabhi yadain magar ab miss hi kartay hain
kabhi jo ammi abbu thay wohi ab mama papa hain
duaain jo kabhi detay thay wo buDhay ab syapa hain
kabhi naraaz hotay thay, magar ab mind kartay hain
jo masla kuch ulajh jaaye, solution find kartay hain
chehel qadmi kabhi kartay thay aur ab walk kartay hain
kabhi kartay thay hum batain magar ab talk kartay hain
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Very nice ghazal 
Deserves a thread of its own 
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Very nice ghazal
Deserves a thread of its own
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^ sure go ahead, open one.
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^ sure go ahead, open one.
Done :D
If you want me to change the title.. Tell me..I'll change it... IK raaz is the only title that came to mind so I put that one for now.
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^ sure go ahead, open one.
Done :D
If you want me to change the title.. Tell me..I'll change it... IK raaz is the only title that came to mind so I put that one for now.
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You and your double posts, throw away your mobile and get an iphone. 
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Done :D If you want me to change the title.. Tell me..I'll change it... IK raaz is the only title that came to mind so I put that one for now.
eh i was just kidding, wasn't good enough to be shared. didn't really want to open under my name
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Teggy will fix it soon:sid:
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Teggy will fix it soon:sid:
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eh i was just kidding, wasn't good enough to be shared. didn't really want to open under my name
I'll change it and open under mine :)
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eh i was just kidding, wasn't good enough to be shared. didn't really want to open under my name
I'll change it and open under mine :)