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are rules changed . . . 3 consecutive posts were not allowed 
nice sharing though :k:
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Mohabat ki kahani mein koi tarmeem mat krna,
Mujy tum tor dena pr mujy taqsem mat krna,
K hum ne thokrein khai hain ashiq ban k dunya ki,
Main jab tak mar na jaon tum meri tadfeen mat krna,
Muhabat ki kahani mein koi tarmeem mat krna,
Mujy tum tor dena pr mujy taqsem mat krna,
Suno tum yu hi apni zindgi barbaad mat krna,
K jab tak ishq na ho hasil k...oi taleem mat krna,
Muhabbat ki kahani me koi tarmeem mat krna,
Muje tum tor dena pr muje taqseem mat krna,
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poetry main aise role age peache hote rehte hain 
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Suno Naraz ho hum se
hum tu wo hain k jinko tu
manana bhi nai aata
kesi ne aaj tak hum se muhabbat jo nai ki
mohabbat kis terha hoti
hamare shehar k atraaaf may to
sakhat pehra tha khizaaoo ka
aor unn main na khushbu thi
na koi phool tum jaisa
aor us shehar-e-pareshan ki faseelain
zard bailoon se youn laadi thi
k
jab zalim hawa
un pay apne paoo rakhti to
us k paaoo k neache
hamara dam nikal jata
suna hay hijr ka wo mosam
kab ka tal chuka ab to
magar jo haar hona thi,
so wo tu ho chuki ab to
suno
HAARE howe logo se rotha nai karte
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Main mar mita to woh samjha ye inteha thi meri
Usay khabar he na thi, khak keemya thi meri
Main chup howa to woh samjha k baat khatm hovee
Phir uss k baad to awaz jabaja thi meri
Jo taana zan tha meri pooshashe dareedah par
Usi k dosh pe raki hovee quba thi meri
Main uss ko yaad karoon bhi to yaad ata nahi
Main uss bhool gya hoon yahi saza thi meri
Shikast de gya apna guroor he ussko
Wagerna uss k muqabil bisaat kia thi meri
Kahee dimagh kahee dil kahee badan he badan
Har ekse dosti yaari juda juda thi meri
Main uss ko dekta rahta tha hairato se Faraz
Ye zindagi se taaruff ki ibtedaa thi meri
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Tum ko aata hi nahin shikwa shikayat karna
Meri mano tum kisi say na mohabat karna
Abh kay bikhra to mushkil say samaito gai mujhay
Phir na aisi mujh say shararat karna
Zulm sahnay say haalat nahin badlain gai kabhi
Abh zarori hai ameer-e-shehr say baghawat karna
Zuban jo kholi to uljhain gai zamanay walay
Chup rehna izhaar kin a himmat karna
Tum nay daikhay meri ghar ki udasi ko Faraz
Ho sakay to kisi sham zara zehmat karna…
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Urdu main likhnay ka buhat buhat shukaria 
main jald he poetry share karoon ga 
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:lajawab: :lajawab:
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One of My Fav
Mere Dil Mein Teri Yaadon Ke Saaye
Hawa Jaise Khandar Mein Sarsaraaye
Humine Sab ke Ghum Ko Apna Jaana
Humine Sab Ke Haatho Zakhm Khaye
Mere Dil Mein Teri Yaadon Ke Saaye
Dil-e-Betab Ki Mussat Toh Dekho
Zamane Bhar Ke Is Mein Ghum Samaaye
Mere Dil Mein Teri Yaadon Ke Saaye
Kisi Ne Pyaar Se Jab Bhi Pukara
Toh Palko Par Sitare Jhil Milaye
Mere Dil Mein Teri Yaadon Ke Saaye
Shab-e-Furkat Har Ek Aahat Pe Mujhko
Yehi Dhoko Hua Shayad Woh Aaye
Mere Dil Mein Teri Yaadon Ke Saaye
Khushi Bhi Hai Zamane Bhar Ko Imdad
Ambar Ke Umra Bhar Aanso Bahaye
Mere Dil Mein Teri Yaadon Ke Saaye
Hawa Jaise Khandar Mein Sarsaraye
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mere library card k 14£ jurmana bhar de koe,pleeeeeg
mi bhi kuch post ker dun:bummer:
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2nd Entry
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MODS 
kia punjabi mi post ker sakte hun sufiana kalam
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I think language ka koyi masla nahi hai bas urdu mein translate ke sath hona chahiye..
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Wo anna parast sahi us ki baton mein iqrar bhi tha.
Us k chubtay hue lehjay mein chupa pyar bhi tha.
Wo mujhy likhta ha k muntazir na raho lakin.
Us ki tahreer mein sadion ka intzaar bhi tha.
...
Wo kehta ha mat rutho k mananaa nahi aata.
Meri narazgi pe lakin wo bekarar bhi tha.
Main shayad phir na likhta usy apni khabar.
Dosti ka bharam rakhna tha kuch dil be_ikhtiar bhi tha.
Shayad yehi us ka anadaz-e-mohabat ho.
Wo mera hum dam bhi tha sitam shuaar bhi tha.
1st entry
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Mere kehny se na paband-e-wafa ho jana,
Dil na many to kisi waqt juda ho jana.
Itna pyar na kar kisi se ae FARAZ,
Tum ne dekha nhi bandon ka khuda ho jana.
2nd entry
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jee jee bilkul kar skti ho 
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acha thanku,mere jurmane ka na socha to pujabi mi bhi kuch nahi ane wala:blush:
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mere pas paisy nai hai..Ehsan bhai aatay hain to us se mangoN gi 