Chullo Aysa Kurtay Hain

Some one told me about this gupshup, i am not sure if you people will like my poetry.

Chullo Aysa Kurtay Hain

in khoobsourat shamoon ko keya hova
kay tayray dil ki halut beyan kurti hain

na wo purindoon kay khoobsourat tranay sunai dain
na wo drakhtoon ki surgooshian mahsoos hoti hain

na wo titlion ka phooloon pay bay tab aana
na wo doostoon kay jamghatay, na wo kisi say uljhna

buss ayk bund kamray ki khirki say daykhoo
un titlion ko un guloon ko, unhain yaad kuroo

wo doostoon ki kumi tu ub poori na ho gi
bus khud say kah lo bus khud say uljhoo

By feelings.

Chullo Aysa Kurtay Hain maykhanay chaltay hain

hummm laikin pehlay yeh to maloom ho male feelings hain ke female?

..nice:flower1:

buhat acha likha hai…appreciate that :k:

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*Originally posted by Azad: *
Chullo Aysa Kurtay Hain maykhanay chaltay hain

hummm laikin pehlay yeh to maloom ho male feelings hain ke female?
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iss say keya furq purta hay? :~)

thanks :flower1: : - )

thanks

:k:

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*Originally posted by feelings: *

iss say keya furq purta hay? :~)
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pata nahi