Chubhan "Ek Azad Nazam"

Dania · October 31, 2003, 8:09pm

un kahi batoon ko
un sunay lafzoon ko
qaid say rehaey do
ke warna …
guzrya hoyay kal ki
chubhan ki bazgasht …
mairi koey unkahi
tumhari koey unsuni
aanay walay kal main
achanak kabhi takrai to
ankhain khoon rooain gi
zubaan laRkharaey gi
samAt kalbalaey gi .
zindigi dagmagaey gi.
jis chubhan pe zinda thay
ik pal main na rahi
to
usi pal mar jao gay

smilly · October 31, 2003, 8:18pm

zaberdest:(

Daagh · October 31, 2003, 10:02pm

sad but beautiful

Koyal · October 31, 2003, 10:14pm

:k:

WiseGuy · November 1, 2003, 12:22am

:k:

BOhat khoob Dania…

Aceones · November 1, 2003, 4:38am

:k:

AQ · November 1, 2003, 5:23am

:)

HeArT_HaCKeR · November 1, 2003, 2:34pm

beautiful :k:

Swera · November 1, 2003, 4:46pm

Very nice...:)

Capricorn · November 1, 2003, 6:47pm

nice one :k:

Jaan_Lewaa · November 1, 2003, 7:22pm

:k:

Azad · November 1, 2003, 11:22pm

Dhania
hummmm

Lamhay · November 2, 2003, 5:20am

Nice one Dania !

Dania · November 2, 2003, 6:34pm

Dhania nahi DANIA

system · November 2, 2003, 6:52pm

:k::k:

Dania · November 3, 2003, 10:21pm

thanks :)