chorr gaya chorr ke jaane waala...!!

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Greek_Goddess December 19, 2015, 6:44pm 1

waada karke na aaya aane waala
chorr gaya chorr ke jaane waala

ab mere naam se bhi jalta hai
mujhko dekh muskuraane waala

apna daaman bachaa ke chalta hai
kabhi woh seene se lagaane waala

chala gaya hai khaak mein milaa kar
humko palkon par bitthaane waala

na poochiye kya guzri hai hum par
ye kissa hai dil dukhaane waala

ab to aik hi duaa hai
khush rahe…mujhko rulaane waala

aabaad rahe… mujhko mitaane waala…!!
chorr gaya chorr ke jaane waala…!!

Anjul December 19, 2015, 7:18pm 2

Re: chorr gaya chorr ke jaane waala...!!

Nice poem...Aye jane wale aaja teri yaad sataaye..khwabo ka gharonda kahi toot na jaye..chala bhi aa..aaja rasiya..

Greek_Goddess December 20, 2015, 1:48pm 3

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Thanks for the extended Version

Anjul December 20, 2015, 2:29pm 4

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@SabrinaB dosti me no sorry no thanks ;)

Greek_Goddess December 20, 2015, 2:33pm 5

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Dosti ... hehe Interesting Uncle

Anjul December 20, 2015, 2:45pm 6

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@SabrinaB you aunty..aunty brakefail ;)

Greek_Goddess December 20, 2015, 2:47pm 7

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No I am like your daughter :)

Anjul December 20, 2015, 2:56pm 8

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@SabrinaB pakka charha rakhi hai larki ne..kbi kid bolti h to kbi uncle

Greek_Goddess December 20, 2015, 3:02pm 9

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AstagfirAllah ....... hosh ki baat karo humarey yehan peene pilane ka riwaaj nahi hai Brother ........... now this is final rishta Bro :) take it or leave it

Anjul December 20, 2015, 3:27pm 10

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@SabrinaB taanashaahi hai kya..apne ko Hitler samajh rahe ho kya madam ;)

Greek_Goddess December 20, 2015, 3:41pm 11

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Meri itni salees Urdu nahee hai ........... I myself Portuguese dont know much Urdu/Hindi ........... kam chulane tuk yeh language ate hai muje

Anjul December 20, 2015, 3:52pm 12

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@SabrinaB I don't like firangis..apni ni pategi..breakup..:p

Greek_Goddess December 20, 2015, 3:54pm 13

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LOL@ LET ME SHAKE YOU UP :) itne bure nahi hotey hain hum

Anjul December 20, 2015, 4:06pm 14

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@SabrinaB okay okay chalo dekhenge..hahaha :p

Greek_Goddess December 20, 2015, 4:10pm 15

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hum dekhte nahee hain :) sorry

Anjul December 20, 2015, 4:58pm 16

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@SabrinaB bade advance ho ;)

Greek_Goddess December 21, 2015, 7:45am 17

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hmm Technology ka zamana hai

ehsan December 21, 2015, 7:53am 18

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Zaroor uss koh kuch ulta seedha bola hoga.

ehsan December 21, 2015, 7:55am 19

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**Ranjish hee sahee dil hee dukhanay kay liye aa
aa phir say mujhey chor kay janay kay liye aa

Tu mujh say khafa hai toh zamanay kay liye aa
aa phir say mujhey chor kay janay kay liye aa**

Greek_Goddess December 21, 2015, 2:38pm 20

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Yehe to afsoss hai hum ne kabhi kohi aisee baat na ki jo wo is kadar rooth jayien :(