Choo’or may’ree shairi . may’ray jaazbaat ko parta

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Choo’or may’ree shairi . may’ray jaazbaat ko parta

Kash hota wooh aysa . jo may’re Zaat ko parta

Par’layta har ek baat . jo dil kaah nahe payah

Sun’laytah har ek hurf. Jo lik lik kay mitaya

Par’layta mayra chand , jo mere Raat ko parta

Parlayta Apna naaam , jo may’ray haaath ko parta

Parlayta ek unkah’ee . mohabaat ke kahani

Parlayta kaysay guzray hai. mayre jawani

Wooh pyar tha mera .yeah thee kohe nadani

Dil nay tu kabhee baaat mayre kohe na Maani

Haatoon jo howe ishq kay. Is maaat ko partah

Kash hota wooh aysa . jo may’re Zaat ko parta

Choo’or may’ree shairi . may’ray jaazbaat ko parta

(ALiyish~)

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Achi kaavish hey ALiyish :k: keep writing and keep sharing :slight_smile:

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Choo’or may’ree shairi . may’ray jaazbaat ko parta
Kash hota wooh aysa . jo may’re Zaat ko parta

V nice keep writing :)

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Thanks Mates !

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kya baat hai aliyish.........buhat khoob likha hai.......thanks for sharing....

Sheyn's Sheynanigans
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zaat ko, raat ko, jazbaat ko kiya perta??
afsos yey hey,
wohh, dekh na saka,
wohh, jo mukabil tow aya,
per kabil na bhen saka..
kabhi mil na saka,
iss ko, gerche, khood sey mila diya!

Dushwari

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nice thoughts, Aliyish.

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not bad! :) achee hai.

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^^ chorii.eee'ay jeee , app bee shairi par.ee ay !

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naheen baba, yeh jazbaat ki sachaai hai jo ayan hai aur shaid isi liyay tareef kar dalee. warna alfaaz ka hair phair tow kis kow naheen aata. :--)

woh quwat e goyai, sama-at aur bisaarat say mehroom tha shaid, warna woh zaroor parta...

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Saif Anda.zay bayaan Baat badaal daytah hai
warna Duniya mein kohii baat , nah.EE baat nahii .

Zaroori naheee kay haar kaaalaaam kissi waardaa.tay qalaabi kaa mazhaar hoo , khabii khabii yea aasss paass rahnay walooon kay noohay be hotay hain ,jo ba.zabanay shaairr kissi nazam yea ghazal mein , aapp hee app dhaal .jahtay hain !

or Inshaa jee tu waysay hee kah.gahay hain kay

Haar baat ki Khoooj tu theek nahee, tum hum ko kahanee kahnay doo !

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hehe , ustad appp baserraaat bhoool gaheeen . That might be the case with that person:)

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haan wohi baseerat, bisarat likh diya, my apologies. sigh
must be something wrong with him/her warna woh eisa na karta/karti :)

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haha, sharminda kardala aap nay, Sir.
I was just trying to get back at you for that reply. :slight_smile: which I didn’t understand in the first go due to the slow processor. judgemental hona tow seekha he naheen :bummer:

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nahee nahee sharmindaa or app hoon :) Allah na karhay !

my point was that , askar shairii , poet ki life kay kissi nay kissi phase say attach hotee hai and mostly people , i aint pointing it towards ya here , dont get the real pitch as for getting it u gotta to be in that same phase or state of mind .

so hum aksaar or baay.ishtaar alfaaz partaay orr saarhaa.tay hain , lakin shayaad unn mein chupaa kaarb mehsoos karnay say qasir hotay hain . woh log kahatayy hain na jis dil pay guzray wohhi janay hai , tu kuch aysa hee mamlaa hota hai .

yea phir baqoool shairr .

Jo saaz say nikliiii hai wooooh duhhhn sab nay sunee haai
Jo saaz pay guzree hai , woh kisss dil ko patah hai !

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First you say kay " shair hazraat mohalay walaon kay bhi halaat par noha kuna hotayhain, so they musnt' be suspected.." then u say "shairi poet ki life kay kissi nay kissi phase say attach hotee hai" "(contradiction, eh??? )

chalain aap meri, uski, iski babt shair kahain and we will refrain from ilzaam tarashi. But Shair's have never been able to absolve 'emselves of the charge, woh kehtay hai na kay,
ilzaam kyaa hai ye bhii na jaanaa tamaam umr
mulzim tamaam umr havaalaat hii mein tha

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Shairr.oon ka mamlaa app kay shair kay mulzim say toraa muqtalif sa hai kay ’ badnaaam hotay hain tu toraa bohaat Naaaam ho.jatah hai ’ naa.

or contradiction kaysi ? che che che kay mohalay wallay kissi ki life ka hisaa nahee hosaktay ?

in me childhood , ek baar mein roof pay Chand daiknay gaya . Kuch dair baad Moi ( thatz what i call me maah ) na awaz di , kay, kia kara.rahay hoo ? mein nay kaha ’ chaand daiik raha hoon ’ . neechay say jawaab ayah , beta neechay ajao or chaand ko bee kahaooo , nechaay chala jahay , bohat raat ho chuki hai ; :slight_smile:

Asal mein shoo.m.ee ay qismaat say chaaand , humari parson ka nick waqay howay tah !

see :slight_smile: so mun.darjaa balaa example say yea saabit howa kay , mohalaay walay bee shairr ki life kay kissi naa kissi phase say attach hotay hain :slight_smile:

awein contradiction::naraz: