cholo aik kaaam kartay hian .......... Aaaj ke shaam teray naam kartay hain

IS · February 27, 2007, 9:36pm

**cholo aik kaaam kartay hian
aaj ke shaaam teray naam kartay hain **

**bhula kar apni zindgi k gham
phir say jinay ka elan kartay hain **

**kartay hian apna milan nirali shaan say
aur apni tanhaiyoon ka kaam tamam kartay hain **

bar ka JHOLI khushiyon ki
zindgi ko teray naam kartay hain

AQ · February 27, 2007, 10:13pm

Re: cholo aik kaaam kartay hian … Aaaj ke shaam teray naam kartay hain

Oh man… you have done a superb job proud of you

Shikra · February 28, 2007, 8:28pm

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deadsoul · February 28, 2007, 8:29pm

Re: cholo aik kaaam kartay hian .......... Aaaj ke shaam teray naam kartay hain

buhat khoob

fghd · February 28, 2007, 9:03pm

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wah

nakhan · March 1, 2007, 8:15am

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Beautiful...

IS · March 16, 2007, 5:24pm

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*Thanks all of you for liking :-) *

Lovely_Me · March 16, 2007, 8:30pm

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very nice.

darwesh · March 16, 2007, 9:42pm

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Jigar Imran....

Kitni Innocent smile wali Nazm hai....Zindabad

Cheers !

Darwesh !

IS · March 19, 2007, 3:51pm

Re: cholo aik kaaam kartay hian .......... Aaaj ke shaam teray naam kartay hain

Thanks Sis **
*how are you *
*long time no see *
**where are you
*hope every thing will b fine wid you :-) *

Thanks For Liking Darwesh Bahi :-)

chacha_Ghalib · March 19, 2007, 4:19pm

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very gud... simple and beautiful...

just wondering... is there a reason the jholi is capitalized?

IS · March 28, 2007, 11:32am

Re: cholo aik kaaam kartay hian .......... Aaaj ke shaam teray naam kartay hain

*^ Thanks For Liking :-) *

*someone told me k how to write Jholi in roman is liay capitalized :-) *

redroses · March 28, 2007, 8:40pm

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bahot achey :k:

Pehalwan · March 29, 2007, 8:31am

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wah wah
buhat khoob

Muslim_girl_1 · March 30, 2007, 8:27pm

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SUPERB imran bhai :k: keep it up!

IS · March 31, 2007, 12:46pm

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Thanks

Sukriya

**Sukriya Sis **
Kitna oncha rakhoon esay kaya sab say oper walay book shelf mai rakh doon esay

Berhi_Bee · March 31, 2007, 5:41pm

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wow bache bohet khoub !! :)

moonmine · March 31, 2007, 7:34pm

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Superb!

IS · April 4, 2007, 3:37pm

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Thanks :-)

Cool_Breeze · April 5, 2007, 6:44am

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good job :k:
impressive

mujhey itna andaaza nai tha waisay k you can write that good.