--Chiraagh khud se bujha hay kay raat beet gaye--

system · September 27, 2004, 11:18am

**
Ye raakh raakh rutteiN, apni raat ki qismat
Tum apni neend bichaao, tum apney khuaab chuno
Bikherti doobti nabzooN pe dhiyaan kiya deina
Tum apney dil main dhaRaktey hovey haroof suno
Tumharey sheher ki galiyooN maiN sail-e-rang bakhair
Tumharey naqsh-e-qadam phool phool khiltey rahieN
Woh rahguzer jahaN tum lamha bhar Theher kay chalo
WahaN per abar jukeiN, aasmaan miltey rahieN
NahiN zaroori kay har ajnabi ki baat suno
Har aik sadaa pe dhaRakna bhi dil ka farz nahiN
Sukoot-e-hulqa-e-zanjeer-e-dar bhi kiyoN tootey
Sabaa ka saath nibhaana junooN ka qarz nahiN
Hum aisey loog bohat haiN jo sochtey hi nahiN
Kay umer kaisey kaTi, kiss kay saath beet gaye
Hamari tushna-labi ka mizaaj kya jaaney
Kay fasal-e-bakhshish mooj-e-faraat beet gaye
Ye aik pal tha jissey tu ney nooch dala hay
Woh aik sadi thee jo bay-iltifaat beet gaye
Hamari aankh laho hay, tumheiN khaber hogi
Chiraagh khud se bujha hay kay raat beet gaye

–Mohsin Naqvi**

HeArT_HaCKeR · September 27, 2004, 4:36pm

beautiful… :k:

WiseGuy · September 27, 2004, 8:11pm

khoob bohat umda... :)

system · September 28, 2004, 10:22am

HH & Wiseguy- thanks :)

Diva · September 28, 2004, 10:30am

Wow Bohat Khoob VV ... And Mohsin as usual at his best .

Thanks for providing us a chance a chance to read his brilliant effort .

Nayab · September 28, 2004, 11:16am

Very Nice Viv Sis...:)

shoaib_akhter · September 28, 2004, 2:17pm

bohat achay :k:

system · September 29, 2004, 11:15am

nayab, diva & shobii thanks so much :)

Saqi_the_angel · September 30, 2004, 10:44am

Vivo Ji Dair se reply ki ma'afi chahta hooN, Woh kiya hai na k dair aaye dorust aye.

Hazir Khidmat hai:

zindagii tuune lahuu leke diyaa kuchh bhii nahii.n
tere daaman me.n mere vaaste kyaa kuchh bhii nahii.n

mere in haatho.n kii chaaho to talaashi le lo
mere haatho.n me.n lakiiro.n ke sivaa kuchh bhii nahii.n

hamane dekhaa hai ka_ii aise Khudaao.n ko yahaa.N
saamane jin ke vo sach much kaa Khudaa kuchh bhii nahii.n

yaa Khudaa ab ke ye kis rang se aa_ii hai bahaar
zard hii zard hai pe.Do.n pe haraa kuchh bhii nahii.n

dil bhii ik zid pe a.Daa hai kisii bachche kii tarah
yaa to sab kuchh hii ise chaahiye yaa kuchh bhii nahii.n

Koyal · September 30, 2004, 12:28pm

v nice Viv..:)

Pramod · September 30, 2004, 5:37pm

Very good...
thanks for posting

system · October 1, 2004, 3:27pm

beautiful, bohat khobsurat ghazal hay :k::k:
aur maafi ki zaroorat nahi

koyal & pramod thanks

cuteepie · October 2, 2004, 5:05am

:k:

Maheen2002 · October 2, 2004, 8:50pm

Beautiful

Amarbail · October 2, 2004, 10:10pm

Beautiful piece of poetry ...
Thanks for sharing and keep it up ...