Chiraag Raah mein Jal gae

ehsan · March 11, 2007, 9:42pm

Mujhe sahal ho gaeen manzilein woh hawaa ke rukh bhee badal gae
teraa haath haath mein aa gayaa ke chiraag raah mein jal gae

woh lajaaye mere sawaal par ke uthaa sake na jhukaa ke sar
yun Dee zulf chehare pe is tarah ke shaboon ke raaz machal gae

Samad · March 11, 2007, 9:48pm

Re: Chiraag Raah mein Jal gae

muje doosra misrah zara samaj nahi aya, thori roshnee dalaingay.

" woh lajaaye mere sawaal par ke uthaa sake na jhukaa ke sar"

AQ · March 11, 2007, 10:00pm

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^
lajaaye = sharmaaye

now read it again

Samad · March 11, 2007, 10:32pm

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aha i see. pata to muje bi tha mai waise hi test kar raha tha.

good sher. i like is nice.

AQ · March 11, 2007, 10:34pm

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yeah right

Shab-e-Hijar · March 11, 2007, 11:24pm

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Nice :k:

moonmine · March 12, 2007, 9:04am

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nice one!

Daanie · March 13, 2007, 4:00am

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buhut khoob :)

alirafaqat · March 13, 2007, 10:44am

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Khoooobsurat :)

Mysterious_Woman · March 13, 2007, 12:33pm

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great - keep it up!

fara · March 13, 2007, 1:06pm

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ahem ahem Ehsan Bhai... Very nice indeed!

NikamiJano · March 14, 2007, 11:23pm

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fghd · March 14, 2007, 11:38pm

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kiya master piece dhooond nikala hai :k:

fghd · March 14, 2007, 11:39pm

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holds flash light over the sher is it enuff?

Samad · March 15, 2007, 12:33am

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sher sunnay kay baad light maiN, mainne apnay pittay ka operation nahi karana.

fghd · March 15, 2007, 1:15am

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^ deemagh ka karwa lou :p

Asma_Farhan · March 15, 2007, 7:41am

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Nice shair n quite deep.