Chandni chhat pe chal rahi hogi

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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chaandni chhat pe chal rahi hogi
ab akeli tahal rahi hogi
phir meraa zikr aa gayaa hogaa
vo barf-si pighal rahi hogi
kal kaa sapnaa bahut suhaanaa tha
aye udaasi na kal rahi hogi
sochataa hoon ki band kamare main
ek shama si jal rahi hogi
tere gahanon si khan_khanaati thi
baajare ki fasal rahi hogi
jin havaaon ne tujh ko dularaayaa
un main meri ghazal rahi hogi

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Re: Chandni chhat pe chal rahi hogi

nice....

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Re: Chandni chhat pe chal rahi hogi

Thodi lambi chauri taarif kar diya karo. Sirf das nazm padhne main 6 ghante, mere paas to hazaar hain, saari umr nikal jaayegi unhe padhne main. Politics or terror discuss karne waalon ki vaise bhi bheed lagi hui hai. :)

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Re: Chandni chhat pe chal rahi hogi

a very nice lil poem:k: thanx for sharing!

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Re: Chandni chhat pe chal rahi hogi

tareef toh wohi achi lagti hain jo doosray khud se karain...khud kah k tareef karwanay ka koi faida nahi:(
Neways, jus kiddin.....Bohat achi choti si poem hai...laikin mein nae pehlay bhi parhi hui hai!:D

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Re: Chandni chhat pe chal rahi hogi

Nice:)

janab taareef bare words mein ki jaie ya chotay words mein tareef hi hoti hay

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Re: Chandni chhat pe chal rahi hogi

lekin kuchch aur bhee hain jinhone pehle nahin padhi hogi :)