Chand Sher....

Pramod · January 21, 2002, 5:03pm

dariyaa ki zindagi par, sadke hazaar jaaneiN
mujhko nahiN gawaarah saahil ki maut marna

ab ye bhi nahiN thik ki har dard mita deiN
kuchh dard kaleje se lagaane ke liye haiN

oos shakhs ke gham ka koi andaazaa lagaaye
jisko kabhee rote hue dhekha na kisi ne

hasti ko tere dard ne kuchh aur kar diya
ye farke-margo-zist to kahne ki baat hai

shafaq,dhanuk,mahtaab,ghataaeiN,taare,nagme, bijalee,phool
oos daaman meiN kya-kya kuchh hai, wo daaman haath meiN aaye to

Baza ye zabt-e-gham phir bhi,mohabbat meiN kabhi ro ley
Dabaane ke liye har dard, ye naadaN nahiN hota.

sabah · January 21, 2002, 5:57pm

Nice

Gemini_the_Great · January 21, 2002, 6:00pm

Nice selection :)

As is a tale, so is life: not how long it is, but how good it is, is what matters. -- Seneca

juMurA · January 21, 2002, 6:08pm

Shaam-e-Firaq · January 21, 2002, 9:01pm

bery gudddddd

“Dream as if u live forever live as if u will die today”

chand_chehra · January 22, 2002, 12:48am

nice shairs

~~Experience is the worst teacher; it gives the test before presenting the lesson.~~

Zakhmi_Umar · January 22, 2002, 5:36am

buhat hi achi poetry hai keep it up

Pramod · January 22, 2002, 4:11pm

Shukriya...aap saboN ka....Thanks...

Baza ye zabt-e-gham phir bhi,mohabbat meiN kabhi ro ley
Dabaane ke liye har dard, ye naadaN nahiN hota.

Akif_zeb_1 · January 22, 2002, 8:40pm

waah je waah mazaa aa gaya janab… very nice collection…

mairay dill mairay mussafir

Capricorn · January 22, 2002, 8:49pm

[quote]
Originally posted by Pramod:
**dariyaa ki zindagi par, sadke hazaar jaaneiN
mujhko nahiN gawaarah saahil ki maut marna

**
[/quote]

Nice:)

Pramod · January 23, 2002, 5:38am

Shukriya..Akif sahab
Thanks Capricon

Baza ye zabt-e-gham phir bhi,mohabbat meiN kabhi ro ley
Dabaane ke liye har dard, ye naadaN nahiN hota.