Chand Raat

Muskan · June 28, 2002, 5:45pm

Main hun ,tera khyal hai,or chand raat hai
Dil dard se nadhaal, hai or chand raat hai

Ainkhon mein chub gye teri yaadon ki kerchyein
Kadhon pey gham ki shal hai or chand raat hai

Falak pey chand k haley be sog kertey hain jo tu nai to ujaley bhi sog kertey hain

Tumharey haath ki churi bhi bain kerti hai
tumhareu hont key taley bhi soag kertey hain… .

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chand_chehra · June 28, 2002, 6:58pm

** sighz **

MÙhb@t kÀ ÃnÒkhå SîÌSîÎã Hãï
KÆhî ý@$®Úb Káhï kÃ®BàÎå H@ï

Tassneef · June 28, 2002, 7:00pm

ohaat hi Piyaara Kalaam hai Muskaan sahibaa

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and Welcome to Poetry Form

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**Ab kahin boltaa nahiN gHaib jo kholtaa nahiN
Aisaa agar kHudaa tumne banaa lyiaa to keya
Jo hai kHuda kaa aadmi uski hai Saltanat alag
Zulm ne Zulm se agar Haath milaa liyaa zo keyaa
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Muskan · June 30, 2002, 12:44pm

Thank you tasneef

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Nayab · June 30, 2002, 12:44pm

Bohot khoob…

Bilkul aap keh naam ki tarha..

And welcome to GupShup

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Ishi tarha ainda bhi post kartee rehye gha…Khushi ho ghee

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show_sha · June 30, 2002, 4:43pm

"Ainkhon mein chub gye teri yaadon ki kerchyein
Kandhon pey gham ki shal hai or chand raat hai"

bahut khob! nihayat khoobsoorat intekhaab

issi tarhan say kuch hay k!

zakhum gehra laga hay ankhoN maiN
meray supnay yoon toot ker bikhray

zindagee mujh say kho gaee hay kaheeN
zidgee bun k jub ho tum bichray

Muskan · July 1, 2002, 11:27am

zindagee mujh say kho gaee hay kaheeN
zidgee bun k jub ho tum bichray

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itni tareef ka shukrya

bichha.D ke mujh se kabhii tuu ne ye bhii sochaa hai
adhuuraa chaa.Nd bhii kitanaa udaas lagataa hai

ye vasl kaa lamhaa hai ise raayegaa.N na samajh
ke is ke baad vahii duuriyo.n kaa saharaa hai

Muskan · July 1, 2002, 11:33am

THANK YOU NAYAB lekin name to aap ka bi NAYAB hai !

Vessai INSHA ALLAH yeh silsila jari rhe ga mujhe acha lagta hai k gupshup

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ki itni ronakon mein ham bhi hisa lein

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Gemini_the_Great · July 1, 2002, 12:27pm

aham jidhar word chand nazr aya bhag parti hai

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Muskan · July 1, 2002, 12:37pm

lo chehra jo chand sa hua …Jhain jhain chand vhain vhain chand chehra.

Nayab · July 1, 2002, 2:08pm

Haan jee kion nahin zaroor…Aap humhare liye ishi tarha ghazals ,poetry post karti rehye gha…

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XChorniX · July 2, 2002, 10:48am

very nice muskan aunty

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[This message has been edited by XChorniX (edited July 02, 2002).]