chand ko daikh ker EID karoN?????????

show_sha · November 11, 2004, 10:30pm

Ajj jub chand falak per aya
Payghaam khushyON ka laya
Churcha hua k EID kal ho gee

May bhee chuut per baitha
Chand kee janib daikh raha tha
Soch raha tha

Ajj say pehlay saree eidaiN
May iss chand ko daikh k kerta tha

Ab jub meray dil kee dhurtee per

Tera roop chamakta hay
Tu kia !
Ab main iss chand ko daikh ker EID karoN???

Nazi83 · November 11, 2004, 10:51pm

wah very well written and ilfaz ku buhat khoob ikhata kya hai !!

show_sha · November 11, 2004, 11:11pm

adaab arz hay!

Dynamic_fire · November 12, 2004, 3:54pm

Very nice and keep writing:flower2:

show_sha · November 12, 2004, 7:16pm

df

Aryaan · November 17, 2004, 3:33am

Wah.. Kya khoob likha hai janab..:k:

show_sha · November 17, 2004, 9:04am

shukriya aryan ! :k:

paki_kurri_1 · December 15, 2004, 11:46pm

:k::k: good job

show_sha · January 1, 2005, 7:37am

thnx !