~* ChaNd ghaNTey... *~

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Ambreen aka Philanthrope… a gem of a poet… Loved her way of writing… This is one of her poems, posted about almost two years ago in Sho’ra-e-GupShup…

Mainey kayi jeevan jiye
Un chaNd ghaNToN meiN..
Jo rait ki maanind haath sey phisal gaye…
Par uski ek ek sa’aat meiN..
Mainey tumheiN pooja hai

Poorey raastey
Udher tum khamosh… Idher maiN..
Par us khamoshi meiN humney dhaiRoN baateiN keeN
Tumhari aaNkheiN…
Aur meri muskurahat ki jumbish
Jis meiN…
Hum ney ek doosrey ko apna aap hawaley kardiya
Kabhi na wapis leney key liye…
tumharey haathoN ka lams.. meri hatheliyoN key raastey…
Merey khoon meiN sara’at kar gaya
Kabhi na rukney key liye…
*Aur… *
Meri saaNsoN meiN tumhari khushboo ki mehkaar aa gayi
Kabhi na murjhaaney key liye..

Suno..!!
*Ab mujhey maloon hua.. *
Mohabbat kya pagalpan hai..!!!

And in reply of this poem, Atif aka JonyBr wrote a male version…

Mainey kayi jeevan jiye..
Un chaNd ghaNToN key har ek pal meiN
Jo hawa ki maanind…
HumeiN choo key nikal gaye
Bey-rehem waqt bhi
*tham na paaya… *
*Par uski ek ek sa’aat meiN *
Mainey tumheiN chaha hai…

Saarey raastey..
Idher maiN khamosh.. Udhar tum…
Par us khamoshi meiN.. meri rooh aur teri rooh ney
Iqraar kiya.. Izhaar kiya.. aur pyar kiya
Tumharey phool sey hoNth aur unki jumbish..
jo meri nazroN ki chub’han sey thi
Hayaa ki deewaareiN gira bethi
aur merey haath bey-qaaboo..
terey haathoN ko apna bethey
Shiddat-e-jazbaat key ehsaas
meri rooh sey terey jis’m meiN sara’at kar gaye
Aur jabmerey hoNth..
merey zab’t sey bagawaT kar bethey
Tumhari saaNsoN ko bey-tarteeb aur tumheiN bad-hawas…
Apney nar’m aur nam ehsaas ki khushboo..
TumheiN soNp aaye..!!

Suno..!!
Ab mujhey maaloon hua..
Yeh pagalpan hi mohabbat hai..!!!
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[ASA]

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mashAllah ... bouhat khoob... thanks for sharing..

[fara]

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haan mohabbat ki shidaat mein insaan ko kuch nazar nahi aata, na reetein na rasmein...
sirf jazbaat ka tofaan huta hay ju baha lay jata hay sub kuch...

shayd muhabbat issi ko kehtay hein

[MuteStorm]

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bht khoob
its really very nice! :)

[ghazal_kisi_ke]

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yeah i remember when they both posted. I miss phili appi and her poetry.

outstanding work :k:

Ps: nigooo love your sig =(

[nakhan]

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Oooooo
nice work ...

[Golden_Scorpion_1]

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Ye… I do Remember when Both of them Posted this

Its wonderful form Both of them…

Abmer was a Gem of our Poetry… Allah Ussay Khush Rakhay… She has Started her Married Life… and… May Allah Keep her smiling throughout her Life. (Ameen)

And… Thnx KN Sweety… For POsting it again

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Thank you for liking AsSweetAs, fara, MuteStorm, nakhan :-)

ghazal:- Yeah... although I didn't know her much, I miss her too.. :-(

GS bhaijaan:- Jee.. may she always be happy and smiling.. :-)

[Aryaan]

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Bohat khoob** KamoshNigahein**..:k:

[Precious_Khan]

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buhat hee achchay ,thanx for sharing:flower2:

[Azad]

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hummmm

[system]

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Thank you Aryaan, Precious^Khan :-)

Azad ji :-)

[Azad]

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kia hay??

[asimaan]

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v nice both of them!!

[Koyal]

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nice one chup ankhain :)

[Deep_Throat]

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Were/Are these two users in love?
Nice shairee :)

[system]

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Thank you or liking asimaan & Koyal

**Azad ji:- **Kuch bhi to nahiN hai...

**Deep Throat:- **I don't think they were in love.. In fact not at all... Thank you for liking though :-)

[_Jogee]

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Good poetry.

[Lamhay]

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amazing stufff thanks 4 sharing ............KN ( oooooooooops KN value chicken ;)

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Thanks ~Jogee~ :-)

Lamhay:- Aaj value chicken wali kahani bhi suna hi deejiye... hehe... Thank you for liking though :-)