~* Chand Ghantay *~

Philanthrope · December 28, 2003, 10:00am

Main nay kae jeevan jiye Un chand ghanton main.. Ju rait ki manind hath se phisal gae.. Per usski aik aik sa'aat main.. Main nay tumhain pooja hai..

Pooray raastay
Udhar tum khamosh… Idhar main..
Per uss khamoshi main hum nay dhairon batain keen
Tumhari aankhain…
Aur mairi muskurahat ki jumbish
Jis main..
Hum nay aik dosray ko apna aap havalay ker diya
Kabhi na vapis lainay kay liye..
Tumharay hathon ka lamse mairi hathailion kay raastay..
Mairay khoon main sara’at ker gaya
Kabhi na ruknay kay liye…
Aur..
Mairi saanson main tumhari khushbo ki mehkaar aagae..
Kabhi na murjhanay kay liye..

Suno!!
Abb mujhay maloom hua hai..
Muhabbat kia pagal pan hai!!!

**
By..
Ambreen Qureshi
(Philanthrope)
**

rock_star · December 28, 2003, 10:31am

wow aap to shaira hain :)

Capricorn · December 28, 2003, 12:34pm

Ambreen, this one is excellent. I commend you for being a powerful conveyor of the feelings. Keep working on ur talent as I see a great woman of beautiful feelings within you.

cuteepie · December 28, 2003, 1:00pm

beautiful

BoReD_iN_BrIsBaNe · December 28, 2003, 1:22pm

:k:

Sehar · December 28, 2003, 1:40pm

Bohat khoobsurat hai Amber! LafzoN ka chunnao and the way it flows is really beautiful.

DiYa · December 28, 2003, 2:15pm

Re: ~* Chand Ghantay *~

waa

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Philanthrope: *

Main nay kae jeevan jiye
Un chand ghanton main..
Ju rait ki manind hath se phisal gae..
Per usski aik aik sa'aat main..
Main nay tumhain pooja hai..

Pooray raastay
Udhar tum khamosh... Idhar main..
Per uss khamoshi main hum nay dhairon batain keen
Tumhari aankhain...
Aur mairi muskurahat ki jumbish
Jis main..
Hum nay aik dosray ko apna aap havalay ker diya
Kabhi na vapis lainay kay liye..
Tumharay hathon ka lamse mairi hathailion kay raastay..
Mairay khoon main sara'at ker gaya
Kabhi na ruknay kay liye...
Aur..
Mairi saanson main tumhari khushbo ki mehkaar aagae..
Kabhi na murjhanay kay liye..

Suno!!
Abb mujhay maloom hua hai..
Muhabbat kia pagal pan hai!!!

**
By..
Ambreen Qureshi
(Philanthrope)
**
[/QUOTE]

JonyBr · December 28, 2003, 2:34pm

Zabardast…eik nazam mein hi sab tasveer kashi bhi kerdi aur dil ka haal bhi bayan kerdia …wo bhi itni khoobsorti se :k:

AQ · December 29, 2003, 12:54am

Pooray raastay
Udhar tum khamosh… Idhar main..
Per uss khamoshi main hum nay dhairon batain keen

*sigh Thanks for sharing :~)

Azad · December 29, 2003, 5:27am

khoob :k:

_Passionate · December 29, 2003, 5:45am

beautiful

Shab-e-Hijar · December 29, 2003, 6:53am

woww simply beautiful :k:

system · December 29, 2003, 7:56am

beautiful, kiya baat hai :k::k:

Philanthrope · December 29, 2003, 2:56pm

Thanks a lot everyone.. Main likhti rahon gi InshaAllah

Capricorn · December 29, 2003, 3:22pm

You are growing up Jony. I really like your comment…aisa laga jaise Literary Criticism ke basics parhe hue hon

Capricorn · December 29, 2003, 3:26pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Philanthrope: *
Main likhti rahon gi InshaAllah :-)
[/QUOTE]

Kaat-te rahiyega ;)

JonyBr · December 29, 2003, 3:38pm

Shukriya

Ji ammi bhi yahi kahti hain isi tarha roz raat ko sonay se pehlay eik glass doodh piya karo jaldi baray ho jao gay

Dracko · December 29, 2003, 7:04pm

aap likhna lekin interval ke baad

Ajnabi4ever · December 30, 2003, 1:55pm

Re: ~* Chand Ghantay *~

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Philanthrope: *

Main nay kae jeevan jiye
Tumharay hathon ka lamse mairi hathailion kay raastay..
Mairay khoon main sara'at ker gaya
Kabhi na ruknay kay liye...
*
[/QUOTE]

Miss Ambreen, Its beautiful and in rythum...Thanks for sharing..

Meri kashkol Khali hai teri yaad kee tarah ..
Meri nigha hai ik timtmmatay diya kee tarah...

Philanthrope · December 30, 2003, 1:57pm

LOlzzz @ Capri .. jee nahi hum aaisa hargiz nahi chahtay

@ Dracko & Jony

Thanks a lot @ Ajnabi