~* Chand Ghantay *~ (Male version)

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Inspred by Philanthrope’s poem here.

http://www.gupistan.com/forums/showthread.php?s=&threadid=133447

Here is my humble attempt to write a male version of similar thought

main ne kae jeevan jiye un chand ghanton ke har ik pal mein jo hawa ki manind... hamain cho ke nikal gae bay reham waqt bhi tham na paya.. per us ki eik eik sa'aat mein mein ne tumhain chaha hai.

saray rastay
idhar mein khamosh udhar tum..
per us khamoshi mein meri roh aur teri roh ne
iqrar kia, izhar kia, aur pyar kia
tumharay phool se hont aur un ki jumbish…
jo meri nazroon ki chubhan se thi
haya ki deewarain gira bethi
aur meray hath beqaboo..
teray hathoon ko apna bethay
shidat-e-jazbaat ke ahsaas
meri roh se teray jism mein sara’at ker gaye
aur jab meray hont..
meray zabt se bagawat ker bethay
tumhari sansoon ko betarteeb aur tumhain badhawas…
apnay narm aur num ahsas ki khushbo…
tumhain sonp aye

Suno!!
Abb mujhay maloom huwa hai..
ye pagal pan hi muhabbat hai!!!

Dec 30th, 2003 - 4:30 AM

:bravo:

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:k:

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Mustansar Hussain Tararr ki yaad dila dii

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:rotfl: yeah :smiley: oh goddddddddddddddddd lolzzzzzzzzz… i know what u are refering to mannnnnnnnnnnn hehe i have read him and lolllzzzzzzzzzzzz

jony bhai : achi hay:p

but azad bhai kaa comment was zabar10 yaar :smiley:

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Wow :k: Very impressive .. Infact mujhe yeh nazm apni se ziada achi lagi… Bohat khobsorat flow hai..Its more romantic and expressive… Thanks Jony for sharing your effort with us :slight_smile:

I feel honored ..

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Thanx every one :slight_smile:

Ye chacho *mustansar husain tarar( wali baat kuch samajh nahi aye konfused havent read him much either…khair thanx again

Phil : nah i think urs better, but i just felt the thought/idea of nazam was beautiful & it only represented the female feelings so tryed to add male version :slight_smile:

:bravo:

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:stuck_out_tongue: thanx :silly:

:bravo:

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bohat alla jony bhai :k:

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nice1....

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great :k:

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Philo Kehti hay.. JONY ki Poem achi hay
Jony Kehta hay Philo ki Poem achi hay
Ab hum kia jaanaiN…
Kiss ki baat sachi hay…

Adab Arz :rolleyes:

Jony Jano… Wo farsi walay kehtya haiN…

Ma tu ra haji bigoyam
Tu mara Haji bugi :smiley:

Any way… Its Gr8 :slight_smile: Zabrdast… Keep it Up… :k: :flower1: