Chand gali to utra hoga

Brijinder · December 4, 2006, 10:24pm

Chand gali to utra hoga
Mujhse shayud rootha hoga

Zahar pyalaa de kar mujhko
Kuch to wo bhi tarpa hoga

Chupke chupke poNcha hoga
AaNkh se gar kuch tapka hoga

Usne khat to bheja hoga
Mujh tak hi na pahuNcha hoga

NeeNd uRa kar meri wo bhi
Shub bhar chatt par tehla hoga

kaleemhk · December 5, 2006, 8:57am

Re: Chand gali to utra hoga

keep it up ............ Very nice........:)

Brijinder · December 8, 2006, 7:56pm

Re: Chand gali to utra hoga

Thanx a lot for the kind words.

Sashak · January 4, 2007, 4:27pm

Re: Chand gali to utra hoga

very nice

Asif2000 · January 4, 2007, 6:03pm

Re: Chand gali to utra hoga

Tanha raat key sannate maiN
har aahat per choNka hoga

jaane kaise roothee khushyaaN
dewaroN see poocha hoga

apney haath kee rekhaaooN se
aadhee shab maiN uljha hoga

sunny_nicky · January 5, 2007, 10:07am

Re: Chand gali to utra hoga

nicee

HeArT_HaCKeR · January 8, 2007, 8:40am

Re: Chand gali to utra hoga

Boht khoob brijinder nd Asif :k: keep it up

Jhuki_Nigahein · January 8, 2007, 4:01pm

Re: Chand gali to utra hoga

very nice

Brijinder · January 8, 2007, 7:54pm

Re: Chand gali to utra hoga

Thanx to u all for making it a century of views n kudos to u Asif.
Regards

_MuNiYa · January 8, 2007, 8:05pm

Re: Chand gali to utra hoga

Awesome.

nakhan · January 9, 2007, 7:52am

Re: Chand gali to utra hoga

Wow nice try Brijinder and lovely addition Aisf

Brijinder · May 25, 2007, 8:46pm

Re: Chand gali to utra hoga

Oops ! i am sorry for replying so late.Thanx a lot for the kind words.

Dushwari · May 26, 2007, 8:13pm

Re: Chand gali to utra hoga

mukarar.