Chand Gali To Utra Hoga

Brijinder · August 25, 2006, 8:15pm

Chand gali to utra hoga

Chand gali to utra hoga Mujhse shayud rootha hoga

Zahar pyalaa de kar mujhko
Kuch to wo bhi tarpa hoga

Chupke chupke poNcha hoga
AaNkh se gar kuch tapka hoga

Usne khat to bheja hoga
Mujh tak hi na pahuNcha hoga

NeeNd uRa kar meri wo bhi
Shub bhar chatt par tehla hoga

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Zamil · August 25, 2006, 8:32pm

Re: Chand Gali To Utra Hoga

Nice Ash'aar...
*Keep it up...n Thanx 4 sharing:) *

fara · August 26, 2006, 7:51am

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Good Work. Keep Sharing!!

Brijinder · August 27, 2006, 11:09pm

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I am thankful to both of u for the warm words of appreciation.

Muslim_girl_1 · August 28, 2006, 12:30am

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nice one Brijinder…keep it up…:k:

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · August 28, 2006, 2:06pm

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Very nice :-)

HeArT_HaCKeR · August 28, 2006, 3:42pm

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Boht khoob!!! keep it up.

Brijinder · August 28, 2006, 9:44pm

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I am thankful to all of u for the kind words.

Amal · August 29, 2006, 2:11pm

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Bohat khobb Brijinder sahab :k: Thanx for sharing it with us

Brijinder · August 29, 2006, 9:17pm

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Thanx,Amal,for the warm words of appreciation.

P_G · August 30, 2006, 7:07am

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[QUOTE]
Usne khat to bheja hoga
Mujh tak hi na pahuNcha hoga
[/QUOTE]

ghalib nay ise situation per kaha hay

dil ko behlanay ko ghlaib khiyal acha hay

nice poem : )

Marbles · August 30, 2006, 10:46am

Re: Chand Gali To Utra Hoga

Khoob Brjinder sahab,

ghazal acchee hai. mazameen bhi khoob hain.

daad qubool farmaiye.

Prince_Ali · August 30, 2006, 4:31pm

Re: Chand Gali To Utra Hoga

Very nice :k:

Brijinder · August 30, 2006, 7:49pm

Re: Chand Gali To Utra Hoga

Thanx to all of u for the warm words.