Chand aek ehad wafa ke aur do chaar phool gulaab ke

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Amal March 2, 2006, 1:25pm 1

Haasil-e-Tamanna!

Chand aek ehad wafa ke aur
do chaar phool gulaab ke
bhala is tarha bhi suno kabhi
panap saki heiN mohabatteiN!

Ye safar jo ishq-o-janooN ka hey
ye safar kaheiN bhi sehal nahi
kaheiN dasht heiN kaheiN dal’daleiN
kaheiN khaar-o-gubaar ke sil’siley
kaheiN dhoop hey kaheiN aaNdhiyaaN
har morr pe heiN naey marhaley
ye safar kaheiN bhi sehal nahi!

TumheiN aarzu hey meri magar
faqat aarzu ka karo ge kya!
tumhey dar abhi sey sabhi ka hey
to kisi imtehaaN meiN parro ge kya!
tum museebatoN sey bhirro ge kiuN
bhala rivaayatoN sey larro ge kya!
ye safar jo ishq-o-janooN ka hey
ye safar kaheiN bhi sehal nahi!

By: Amal

HeArT_HaCKeR March 2, 2006, 8:21pm 2

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beautiful nazm once again

thx for sharin’ nd keep writing … :k:

AQ March 3, 2006, 1:23am 3

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ye safar kaheiN bhi sehal nahi!

:)

Dilsay March 3, 2006, 1:35am 4

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TumheiN aarzu hey meri magar
faqat aarzu ka karo ge kya!
tumhey dar abhi sey sabhi ka hey
to kisi imtehaaN meiN parro ge kya!
tum museebatoN sey bhirro ge kiuN
bhala rivaayatoN sey larro ge kya!
ye safar jo ishq-o-janooN ka hey
ye safar kaheiN bhi sehal nahi!

Wah.... Amal jee... sawal acha hai aur sacha behi magar aab agar kabi dill main is ka jawab aya tu zaroor likhiya ga please

darwesh March 3, 2006, 2:50am 5

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Jigar Amal Bhai....khushbash,
Mubarak.....achhi aur sachhi kawish hai.

NikamiJano March 3, 2006, 3:43am 6

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Beautiful like always:)

chand_chehra March 3, 2006, 3:19pm 7

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now i’m speechless
Scrolling up and reading it over n over

chalo_ab_faisla_kar_lo March 3, 2006, 5:58pm 8

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wah amal sahib qail ho gaye aap kay

ghazal_kisi_ke March 4, 2006, 4:09am 9

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:(

two thumbs up!

Nickless March 5, 2006, 3:51pm 10

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HOw can u write so well? .. kasmE i am always amazed.. I mean .. jus totally awesome.. i get so frustrated when i cant do it.. i mean i have a lotta half scribblin (wont call it poetry ) i jus lose all my vocab .. be it urdu or angrezi

i am jealous of u n ppl like u.. there i said it..

(now take that as compliment.. no harm meant.. )

Amal March 7, 2006, 12:52pm 11

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Thanx a lot for liking this poem HeArT HaCKeR, Anwaar Qureshi, Dilsay, darwesh, NikamiJi and ghazal kisi ke

Now this is perhaps the most flattering one I ever had from you . Thanx a lot CC. Wesey agar aap chaheiN to NikamiJi wala style bhi try kar sakti heiN. UnhoN ney jab GS join kia tha to ye response save kar ke desktop par rakh liya tha: “Beautiful like always:)” Copy&paste to aati ho gi na aap ko bhi

I tell you the formula right here. Just keep doing it and one day you will be writing just like me, or maybe much much better than me

Nickless March 7, 2006, 5:15pm 12

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i guess.. .. see i get this amazin idea and i write abt it and thn whn i read it again . .i say to myself itz rubbish.. i talked with ahmad faraz abt it as well and u knw wat he told me .. he said i am tryin to compete with my own self.. ab i dunno when n how i can stop doin that.. but anyway .. 'nuff abt me .. u do write beautifully and i bet i cant write like that .. ya phir yeh kiya jaye sab kaam chor ker din raat sirif likha hi jaye tu shayad…

amal fear the day when i stop everythin else

Shahana March 10, 2006, 11:21pm 13

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Amal .again very nice poem .superb.

NikamiJano March 11, 2006, 3:23am 14

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na shukray log

ghazal_kisi_ke March 11, 2006, 3:39am 15

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will start working on that =P

Amal March 11, 2006, 5:05pm 16

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Bismillah

Kya faeda, aap ney kon sa hum sey share karna hey

Shahana, thanx for liking it

Nickless, keep trying…there is no shortcut. It will only work if you are not in a hurry

Capricorn March 11, 2006, 7:23pm 17

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Very meaningful and very well written. Impressive :k: