Chaman mein jub bhi

Re: Chaman mein jub bhi

tumhari aankh ka ihwaal khwab poochte hain :k:

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Third shair, second line, is it correct and what does it mean?

Re: Chaman mein jub bhi

wo tishna labbhi ajab hain jo mauj e sehra se
suragh e habs, mizaj e sarab poochte hain

mere khyal se ye ussi tarah ka shair hai jaise Qateel Saheb ne kaha tha:

Mujh se tu poochne aaya hai wafa ke maani
ye teri sada dili maar hi na daale mujhko

Mauj e sehra se suragh e habs aur mizaj e saraab poochne walon ke liye kahen ge 'hath kangan ko aarsi kia'

Re: Chaman mein jub bhi

^ Thank you

Re: Chaman mein jub bhi

:lajawab:

Re: Chaman mein jub bhi

^ Mohsin Naqvi ka jawab nahin

Re: Chaman mein jub bhi

Baat to Fakhira aunty ki bhi alag hi hai

Re: Chaman mein jub bhi

achchi hai

Re: Chaman mein jub bhi

kon?